• Published 11th Oct 2017
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The Promise of Home - Troublesome Beast



Luna gets tired of Celestia delaying on a promise to take Twilight to their ancestral home. After Luna's sexual wiles get her to follow through, Celestia takes Twilight to the last home of the Alicorns. Weirdness, memory, and sex follow swiftly.

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Comments ( 7 )

Even without editing, it's quite nice

How in the hell can you say this is "unpolished"? This is incredibly powerful and well written.

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Thank you very much for the kind words. This was written in a time period where my health was better anyway but there are lots of places where the porn could be hotter and the writing tighter. Editors are amazing, I miss mine. But I'll try to get everything I have raw at least complete to be pushed out.

You know I wonder what was Twilight’s first time like as an Alicorn? That might be a good basis for another story.

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