Princess Luna is alone with her thoughts on the moon. Or is she? The anger and bitterness still torment her and the crushing solitude of 1000 years trapped on the moon is taking its toll on her sanity and her perspective.
Princess Luna is alone with her thoughts on the moon. Or is she? The anger and bitterness still torment her and the crushing solitude of 1000 years trapped on the moon is taking its toll on her sanity and her perspective.
Not bad...
It's pretty good. Would've been better if there was going to be more.
Hmm...a nice start. You've done a good job of describing the scenery and expressing the tension between Luna and Nightmare Moon. The beginning was slow but it definitely picked up when Nightmare came in. Can't wait to see what happens next!
LOOOOOOOVE IIIIIIIIIIIT! *sings like peter in family gay* definate fave and add to group! i wrote a nightmare fic based on my little dashie. i LOVE nightmare fics!
Simply great, can't say more than that.
Good way to propose a theory to explain Nightmare's intentions.
This is good material, really.
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Thanks a lot man. Really appriciate the positive feedback. I'm working on continuing the story and trying to find the time to actually sit down and write.
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working on it