While young filly Celestia grows in friendship with the one pony she can count on, her simple life as princess seems to her like sunshine-and-rainbows. But a darkness grows in the corners and threatens to overshadow her happy reality and everything she's ever known. Follow Celestia as she takes along her one true friend in a journey that will lead to unbreakable bonds, but at the same time, inevitable broken hearts.
For a first story, not too shabby. Cute cover art, too.
Just make sure to show not tell and work on developing your prose. Good luck.
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Thanks! I'll be sure to work on it in the future. Hope you enjoy my future chapters
Who made the picture? Did you do it?
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Yeah, I made it!
Yaaay! Celestia's going to be a big sister!
Uh-oh... Princess Cloudwhisper was kidnapped?! That is NOT good! Not good at ALL!
Oooh! I bet they are going
TO DA MOOOOOOONA
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Haha! We'll see...