When the Main 6 and Spike get teleported to a unknown world through a riff in space and time. Lucky there was someone willing to help them get through this world and get them home. The rest in the long description
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I have read some stories with bad grammar but this easily takes the cake as the worse. I wanted to see why this was so down voted and got my answer within the first paragraph.
This story looks like it was written by a child who is way to young and should not be allowed to continued. Mainly because your grammar leads me to believe you should not have a story with the M rating.
I very rarely get on people about grammar, because most of the time (from what I've seen), the grammar mistakes were from rushing a chapter or story and not taking their time. But this is clearly a lack of basic grammar skills that should of been learned many years ago.
If you were actually 23, you would NOT be having these issues.
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There is no way you could have read through all 29 chapters and I working with what I got.
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I never said I read through entire story, I quit after the first paragraph. I actually got a headache trying to read it.
Even if you grammar was ok, the pacing of the story 'seems'
to be terrible, too much happened in the first paragraph to properly convey what was happening.
Also, your reply to me just makes it even clearer that you should not be writing an M rated story as your grammar is, again, lacking.