When the Main 6 and Spike get teleported to a unknown world through a riff in space and time. Lucky there was someone willing to help them get through this world and get them home. The rest in the long description
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*stops reading halfway through first chapter because of crap grammar/spelling*
Well, it’s been two months, maybe he’s improved over time.
*reads first sentence of ch.23*
Nope
Simply writing your rough draft in Word would correct a significant amount of errors in your writing.
Ok, fellas. Evitus or James Cribb.
Who is worse?
But all in serious. You need to get an editor, bad. If you want this to be successful you have to prove-read in order to make sense of what you are writing about.
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I'd have to go with Evictus. This guy only has 1 terrible story up. Evictus is responsible for over 200 brain damage inducing pieces of drivel.
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The description just by itself is a dead giveaway and looks like it was just written as a sudden idea and left as that. And I'm counting the rest of this typed... stuff is... Well... I'll just assume the rest is just as cancerous honestly. For I not even dare tread down this path. And I can survive reading through constantly repetitive styled Displaced stories...
Truth be told, I originally came here to see the shit show and finish my leftover popcorn after watching Terminator 3... I think there's some ice cream in the freezer...
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Weather that statement is complete bullshit or not, I don't give a damn. Age does not factor in one's true wisdom. Thus, it doesn't change the fact that people are killing this one straight outta the box. I suggest you be honest with yourself and figure out on improving yourself. I, truth be told, made a horrid first fan fic on this site. Grammar nazis be rolling out of their graves at it's many crimes to even exist. And I got pretty much the equal amount of reception as you are getting as well... But I (thankfully) learned my lesson and continue to improve from my many, many mistakes throughout my time on this site and in the real world. I hope you don't go Sonic Joker (or whatever the fuck is his name is now) and block out any slight criticism. Good or bad, it helps to admit and learn from those mistakes.
Please, if at all, take my honest advice.
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Thanks for your feedback and helping me out on this for later stories down the line. Let me asks you this? I'm still looking for an editor. Do you know anyone that can help me out on this and future stories?
Thank you, James Cribb