Ultra's life is great. He is living with his sister who he loves dearly, he has lots of great friends, and he is the very successful owner of Ultra's Video Arcade. But he can't help but think something is missing. It isn't until fate brings him close with a certain unicorn that he notices what it is: love.
Co-written by my wonderful girlfriend Ami. <3
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Quick question, is this a rewrite of your old Ultra fanfic?
Hm.
Seems legit.
Favorited...
Watched...
Liked...
Okay. Seems about it.
Now for the next chapter.
EDIT: Also, you said "feet" at some point with with Whispers at some point. I'm guessing you meant "hooves."
Very good, very good.
It's not every day you see a well thought out and enjoyable OC fic.
Splendid job.
925679 No, this is a different fic. Just hit some MAJOR writers block with my first one, so I thought I'd start working on this other fic that me and my girlfriend, who made Whispers, really wanted to make. The first one isn't done though. Just taking a little break.
925720 Ah, thanks. Probably never would have caught that on my own.
925740 Thanks!
hmmmmmmmm. I somehow find the scenario of Three muscular pony/Griffons being beat up by one gamer nerd unlikely, but I'll go with it.
Especially since when they have a three against one fight, one decides to run away and he takles him, and the other two just... Stand there?
933546 It all happens very quickly. Plus, Ultra gets his ass kicked, but just doesn't back down. But I see where you're coming from.
It wasn't really, "This guy is kicking our asses." more than it was, "It's difficult to kick this guy's ass.". Also, yeah, that is pretty bad, so I guess its RANDOM EXPLANATION I PULLED OUT OF MY ASS TIME!!
They...were...umm...they were...STARTLED...because...he was...was running away and...and-and just leaving them. So...yeah. That's all I got.
933578 Takin shit out of a hat like a boss my friend. fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/046/3/e/shit_hat_by_kitty14567-d39n6ox.png
933643 *takes a bow* Might actually change it a bit sometime. Give that a reason. :P
Very nice. I'm liking the story so far can't wait to see what happens next
D'aww a nice sweet chapter
D'awwwww
Not bad. Worth a thumbs up and a fav. I hope you continue this story....
Go on, am likeing it so far.
Liking the story so far, keep it up!