Then, they went inside the house. “So how was school?” Twilight asked.
“Good and already made a BFF,” Rainbow Light said. “So fun if it wasn't from my BFF, Sketchy Clouds that I said bye to earlier.”
“Glad you had a fun time,” Twilight said.
Rainbow Light had a rest because she was tired from school.
To be continued...
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Interesting story, but I personally feel that it needs to be longer. It has great potential, and could be a really great story. It just needs more details. Describe the story more. Explain what Sketchy looks like. Other than that I loved this story, and I'm really honored that you put Sketchy in it.
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I’am a short writer and it's sometimes hard for me to edit.
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Its okay, I feel it's still a wonderful story.
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Thanks
Lovely story
One thing though....
How does Rainbow Light have gold eyes since none of her parents do
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It's a mixture of eyes and never drawn this picture.