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I am really interested, maybe forge could end up leading a changeling rebellion
Chapter...new! Yay!
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As explained in the author's note for chapter 1, it's only for chapter 1. The rest will use the name of the identity he's currently in.
Just caught up and I think its a fun story. and I'm looking forward to more.
And I must say, THIS
best out of the blue line ever!!!!!
The Monk
"I-I'm sorry, did you just say 'blowjob'?" Jesse had to think seriously hard about this.” -An Intricate Disguise
Love the color on that changeling
MOAR!!!!!!!
I gotta admit, I'm pleasantly surprised by how much the quality improved after the first chapter. Stories like this are why I usually read past the first chapter, even if that chapter is rough.
I'm definitely going to see where this is going. Hope to see an update soon.
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I will address these critiques in order.
1, I should have mentioned in the author's note that he thinks of the unreformed lings as "husks" since they have holes and are constantly in need of love for sustenance.
2. I didn't really notice the slight delay, so I'll have to add in a bit about him needing to adjust his gait.
3. Could've worded it better, but basically he figured it would be better to use an original guise rather than trying to imitate anypony else.
4. I mostly just figured it would feel like a new sense or something. Like an extra arm, and once you find the mental "control" for it, you go from there. I may or may not think about this often, and learned to wiggle my ears from this technique.
5. He knows that the Whitetail Woods are close to Ponyville, hence figuring he should head that way. I skipped the navigation itself since I have absolutely no idea what the layout of Whitetail is pretty much at all, and it might've become too boring.
6. The Whitetail Woods are near Ponyville, however the reason the Everfree would have been easier to navigate is due to the frequency of it being shown, meanwhile he has absolutely no guiding point when it comes to Whitetail. Kind of like a "more dangerous yet easier to find your path" kind of thing.
7. You've got me there. Most likely he wouldn't have thought too deeply about it until the damage was already done. He might try to plan ahead, but more often than not things will go south fast.
8. That's mostly assumption since he's a changeling now, though I admit I still need to work on fixing chapter 1 up since it's mostly a remnant from the first run of this story.
9. Welp, gotta rework that. Thanks for the heads-up.
10. Overuse of manners. He's got a few anxiety issues that crop up now and then, and ends up doing things like that. And will apologize a lot.
11. It's a minimum wage job equivalent to places like McDonald's, pay won't be stellar.
12. I do need to fix it.
I'm going to get to work on editing all of this, thank you for bringing it to my attention. Also, new chapters will be slow until December 2nd, since I have the month off from college. It's pretty draining on me, and it's hard to find the motivation to write when I'm burnt out.
O damn it... I catched up to the currently last chapter Hoped for 1-2 more
Chrysalis might want his genetic material for a clutch or two. Genetic variations are the fuel of a strong and healthy race.
Its nice he can put his love reserves to good use. His possibel first swarm/herd mate seem to be very impressed by his performane
Since female and males exist hes not going to be a Queen.
Sooo... Can he change into the opposent gender?
If a queen is required for eggs than i hope some conquered Queen are alive. Otherwise Chrysalis would risk the eradication of there Race if anything happens to her...
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Indeed. A story worth looking forward to it seems. I wonder how many Queens are still alive. Or if Drones can evolve to new ones.
What do you think about reformed Changelings? Personaly i dislike em. In the story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/429845/to-be-a-changeling
Its well explained why reformed Changelings are bad. In story and comment section.
.......yes
Like a certain bug queen who will grow more and more frustrated when her spies keep being unable to find anything about the strange changeling that seemingly appeared out of nowhere
Its good to know that a Queen isnt needed for the recreation of there race, merly preferd for Quantity i guess. Possibel minor willing gen manipulation like:
Gender , body/magic traits etc.
So we're just going to skip the whole "love producing ling" bit of suture's little insurrection? Ok....
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The fact that he can generate love... All changelings can and that's kinda canon. They just never ever attempted share their love and that's actually canon.
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Hes definitely sharing the love.Ha
Hooligan?This word is too accurate.🐴
Avarice you do know that the legion of doom was not formed til season nine and furnace is still in season one so it should say meanwhile at the changeling hive
He didn’t mention the other changelings in Canterlot.