The demise of the Dazzlings was one that Sunset felt the most guilty about. Even though they were on an evil path, she wants to help them regain their voices.
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So Post-Friendship Games or Post-Camp Everfree?
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post camp everfree
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So don't read it instead of being a jerk about it.
Where's that cover picture from?
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It´s from a tumblr artist called Ponut Joe, Ponut Joe´s Pony Ride is the name of the blog. It is NSFW so I can´t post the link in the comment but the dude makes some seriously sweet art.
Interesting story, I'm curious to see how Sunset and Company can help the Dazzlings. One thing that made me a little hesitant was Sunset's sense of guilt towards sirens. I understand that while Sunset has also passed for the same situation, she want to offer Adagio and Co the same help she has received, but the factor "I feel guilty" is perhaps too much, but it is only the first chapter so it is still early to give a judgment definitive. But in spite of everything one deserves an inch up and a place among my favorite stories, I can not wait to read the next chapters.
P.S: By reading the History Tags I have to deduce that this story unfortunately (for a matter of personal taste) will not have SciSet as pairing but will have the SunDagio (which like pairing I like a lot, but I prefer much more SciSet)
P.S.S: can I at least hope in a PinkieXSonata? This site needs more stories with them as a couple. (at least for me, since with SciSet are my favorite pairs).
P.S.S.S: I renew your congratulations for this beginning of the story.
Overall this hit a reasonable balance between factions, I thought, with neither side being massively difficult about it. Though the Rainbooms were fairly uniform in their opinion, it might have been nice to have more diversity there, with some being more open to the idea than others, rather than Sunset vs everyone else.
I think it would have benefited from being a lot longer. Like, Sunset's decision to help defeated enemies, ones who have expressed no remorse whatsoever, is a big deal, but the whole scene was handled in 700 words.
I can't blame Sunset. I too would be open to overlooking a crime against humanity or two for the prospect of sexytimes with Adagio.
Little idea I had for the progression of the sirens should they reform and get there powers back is they go from sirens to muses using there powers to inspire people rather than controlling them.
Well, this could be an interesting one.