• Member Since 12th Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Yesterday

kitsy-chan


T
Source

Magic has slowly been flowing into the world. Ever since the appearance of Twilight Sparkle's crown in Canterlot High, more and more magical incidents have occurred. So far the Mane Seven has done their best to keep this contained but sometimes they are simply not available. Sometimes they can't be reached.

When an artifact is found by a student which has pony symbols and strange writing on it, its origin is obvious. Remembering whats happened before, the quick thinking student brings the item to Principal Celestia, and now its up to her to decide, how to handle this.

Special thanks to Sparky for editing.
Alkarasu for artwork!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 28 )

Sighing softly, she turned to head to the bedroom, “And the girls don’t even really need to know about what happened. Life will go back to normal.”

YEEEEEAH! Keep telling yourself that, hot stuff!

JFalk #2 · Sep 7th, 2017 · · 1 ·

I really would like to see a sequel to this!

Sweet story and that's funny how the item was just a "tourist bauble" as you had Principal Celestia say that, I would love to see what would happen if some gems or pony money ended up in Human Equestria and was found by Principal Celestia or Vice-Principal Luna, they could really use the money to help the school out I bet.

This needs a sequel and expansion.

wow totally wow this a awesome story.
Kitsy hit a home run with this and all i can really say is sequel.

When an artifact is found by a student which has pony symbols and strange writing on it, its origin is obvious. Remembering whats happened before, the quick thinking student brings the item to Principle Celestia, and now its up to her to decide, how to handle this.

Toss it into the portal.
Also, wrong homophone of 'Principal' is used.

I do love that touch about Twilight being upset or excited hard to tell. Probably mix of both her library has been messed up at least it was deliberate

8413226 Principal Celestia had no idea where the mirror came out or what the artifact was so while maybe not the best response it was at least semi-logical. it might of been something like the alicorn amulet and who knows who would've stumbled across it if she had just tossed it through

All that because of a.. Commemorative coin. Sunset probably had it and sold it to a coin collector who had a table at the flea market Lyra bought it at.

Okay, now that I've actually read it...it's decent. Not the best I've ever read, but also far from the worst.
My whole 'toss it into the portal' idea was brought up and disseminated, which is nice (I mostly left that comment because I was busy reading something else, and just went to the homepage to see if anything interesting was there for me to read later).

I would like to read a continuation, seeing Luna's 'exchange information and culture' program come to fruition.

8413226
The whole concept of just tossing it through the mirror vs going was a case of the principle effect, or i should say the principle of double effect. The ethical method for evaluating the permissibility of acting when one's otherwise legitimate act may also cause an effect one would otherwise be obliged to avoid.

You are a blessing to us, Mrs. Celestia. You gave us hope!
And for that, you must be DESTROYED!

God dang tourist traps.

Causing possession and interdimensional hopping since 1985

0

Squeal sequel.

8415026
found at the mystery shack, in gravity falls, on a field trip... on their way to everfree forest.

8413945
Goddamned assassin logic

8415045 I second this emotion sequel now!!!

Good story but there a small problem. Twilight never have any problems with speaking with EG-humans or reading books/the internet. Which kinda suggests that EG and Equestria use same or similar writing system and language.

8416578
BUT we also see 3 diffferent written languages. one symbol based, one squiggle based, and one thats close to english.

since it was a Replica its base language was the pictorgams, with the unicorn "squiggle" rather then the alphabet.

“And what’s the butt? I know there’s a big butt, bigger than my butt coming.”

:twilightoops:

8417326 Yep, principal celestia is allwed to make fun of princess celestia's butt.

I don't know about you, but I think that it's setting up for a story series. What that is, is all dependent on you (no pressure).

If you do, actually make a story series, I wanna see more of where this goes. Thanks for the story.

I think it would be an interesting read if you made a continuation of Luna's idea.

This clearly needs a continuation! You left it wide open! :pinkiehappy:

I hope this receives a sequel, whether for the exchange and magic lessons, the can of worms that was opened by Daybreaker's presence, or both.

Login or register to comment