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In a world of super tech, magic, gods and mortals. In a time when superheros battle aliens, monsters, demons, and villains. A young girl strives to find her footing, find her place, to make friends and survive. She holds the power of the sun inside of her, but will it be too much for her.

Gotham Knights follows the journey of a young Gothamite, as she grows into something much more. Hunted by dark forces and chaos, her only chance is the friends she makes along the way.

Special thanks to Alkarasu for the Art work and Brightlight24 originally and now rich-online for editing.

starting chapter 7 editing by rich-online for wash and to kalash93 for rinse

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Comments ( 65 )

Wow...what a start!



And... first comment!

Batman+ponies=win! So tracking this story!

this is going to be so good.

Does Etrigan not rhyme anymore?

Fun? yes. Interesting? yes. But, is it a crossover if MLP:FIM is a show within the DC universe and the little girl is only a representation of Celestia in appearance only? How does that work anyway? does she look like a real horse or a giant version of the toy (like a marionette Pinocchio)

Also, I could totally see Celestia running the streets of Gotham looking like this...i32.photobucket.com/albums/d12/GabrielsThoughts/gothic_celestia_by_kawaii_desudesu-d7i436t_zpsp8vx1ujd.jpg
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You know, just in case the actual Celestia shows up somehow.

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But, is it a crossover if MLP:FIM is a show within the DC universe

But there's no MLP:FIM in DC. Celestia that she's holding is a pegasus. :raritywink:

Kitsy, I have to admit, that was a brilliant way to accidentally get an alicorn. :pinkiecrazy:

7324116 There are different versions of Etrigan. I opted for the snarky and rude one from thee DC Animated Universe.... Batman TAS, Justice league. Its actually fun trying to match that level of Snark.

7324275 Wait, watch an see. Though, MLP doesn't exist in the DC universe, but there is a show that does, Pretty Pretty Pegasus. Its not quite my little ponies, but... Close enough for this to work nicely :)

It's my birthday to day so i figured I'd share a present with my readers.

The joys of being a child in Gotham. Now the sad part is that she has to deal with all the craziness that Gotham dishes out on a regular basis.

And, this is what you get when you cross Spawn with Batman...

The plot thickens.

this story is really picking up and gaining speed rather fast.

Great chapter! It makes me wonder if Zatanna knows who Batman is? If my memory serves me correctly the only person he trusts is Alferd. Dick/Nightwing is also possibly trusted but you can just never tell with Batman.

Yes, but is Dasher actually Rainbow Dash? The description doesn't specify her appearance and that rainbow colored pony is the first image that pops to mind.

7438684 nope, pure white pegasus with white mane and tail.

Awesome chapter! If bats isnt careful he is going to become greatly disliked. :twilightsmile:

exultant chapter and it gets better every time I read it.

Bats get use to the cute attack, you will have to take care of a filly Rarity in a few decades.

Dash in any universe at least in her head the best pegasus.

wow I am so totally impressed with this story just wow.

Okay didn't expect Eris, side note. HOW in the heck did ERis became the name for Female Discord?


As for Dash, I'm just waiting for her fur to go cyan, her mane become a rainbow, and perform a sonic boom.

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HOW in the heck did ERis became the name for Female Discord?

Because she's basically IS female Discord? Blame Romans, they called her Discordia. :pinkiecrazy:

So is there going to be a scene where we find batman watching pretty pretty Pegasus as research material?

7759519 What I'm wondering is if this means that Teen Titans Go! Raven is going to show up as a consultant on the show for Batman? It would be awesome to have Raven (voiced by Tara Strong) providing an analysis of the lead character of PPP (also voiced by Tara Strong,) and the show's characters, especially if she has a momentary freak-out, ending with a totally Twilight-ish "Great Celestia!" :twilightsmile:

When could we be expecting another chapter in this story?

8168324 probably in a week or 2... i have one half done but i'm also working on snails and velvet.. LOL.

wow this is a super good chapter, i really love the style of writing you are doing with this story Kitsy it just shines.

This gets more interesting by the second...

Okay, you've earned a fave with this story!

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Thanks. Just your average batman my little pony cross.

Die Nyx die, that is beyond evil what she just did. Also why is Zatanna surprised by Batman’s actions she should know by now how paranoid he is.

...did the comics remove Etrigan's need to speak in rhyme? Lately everyone I've read who uses him in a crossover has him speaking normally, but I am way out of the loop on DC so I could have missed something.

Blinking, Tia hid behind Zatanna’s leg. “Why I everyone staring at me?”

I think you mean “is”....

Otherwise, awesome job as always!

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it has to do with the DCAU, in justice league, justice league unlimited and such, they went with him just being down right rude.

Though in the movies, Justice League Paradox, and justice league dark, they have him rhyme.

Since i'm more working with the DCAU tv version i went without rhyme.

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Because the word Eris in Greek means Discord, and Eris is the Goddess of Discord (aka, Disharmony). She was Discord before Discord was Discord.

Side note: Discord may have his eyes because of her. Specifically, the most major appearance of Eris in modern visual fiction was her appearance in the animated film Sinbad and the Seven Seas (I think that was its name) by Dreamworks, in which Eris has yellow eyes with red pupils. I think the odds are very good that that part of Discord's design was inspired by that version of Eris.

Nyx making Nightmare Moon.....lol. Misty don't tell me that wasn't a Past Sins ref.

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nyx is the greek goddess of darkness, daughter of a celestia titan. Its greek mythology, an fits so well with DC.

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I figured but also a nice little reference as well.

a totally awesome chapter.
and really Harley you garbed Tia as a hostage this is not going to turn out good if she gets board.
i wonder how Mr. J. will like Tia's sunny personality.

Why would Batman allow Tia to take the Joker as a hostage? That's animal cruelty! :trollestia:

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You don't know Batman. Or the Joker. Joker has nothing to lose. He's insane. Batman does, and is not. Plus, Batman had her tagged so there was no need to push the situation when there was a better way to save her....plus....he's using her to track her to Joker's lair. Classic Batman. Did he willingly choose to have her captured? No, but he is making the best of a dicey situation.

A very good storyline. I like that it ISN'T a cross-over, even though it incorporates two different genres. It is an origin MLP story imbedded in a Batman universe. Definitely a breath of fresh air. Definitely enjoyable to read.

Well now we have the spirit that will possess Luna and turn her into Nightmare Moon. Please put me down for Harley to getting transformed but becomes younger and becomes Luna.

holy crap this is good.
now this is how to make a comeback after your vacation and much needed R & R


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i like this idea.

Harley to getting transformed but becomes younger and becomes Luna.

:pinkiehappy:

Good to see more of this.

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