The two bearers of the Elements of Harmony have done a good job keeping their relationship hidden for a while, after discovering the feelings they mutually shared. Rainbow Dash couldn't be happier, and sometimes she can't believe how lucky she is to love and be loved by the breath-taking mare Applejack is, physically and emotionally. She is convinced the same goes for her lover, but one night she comes to terms with the upsetting truth, realizing how much her past can still influence her present.
This is the very first story I publish on FIMFiction, so I probably messed up with tags and genres - forgive my inexperience, and please tell me how to correct the mistakes I might have made... Anyway, I hope you enjoy this first completed arc of mine dedicated to my beloved OTP
Not bad at all for a first tempt at writing. It's pretty good, but just needs an editor (like me if you are willing) to patch up some rough spots here and there.
Other than that, great job! And greetings from Aviano!
Wow. I am deeply impressed by this. Great first story!!! Very believable emotions, very well written. You've earned my follow. :)
Is this a contest entry?
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No, it's not
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Righto, just making sure!