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dragonfang33


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When six eggs are stolen from the Dragonlands, Spike becomes the prime suspect. However as events unfold, Equestria soon finds itself facing a threat not seen in centuries. For within the Realm of Venom, far beyond the White Mountains of the Far North, the Nightmare of Equestria is stirring from his slumber. The Second Dragon War is coming, and only united can Equestria stand against the storm.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

I like it so far, however you are missing a TON of paragraphs. When a new character speaks you add a new paragraph I know that you did that but you have to have a space between two paragraphs.

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Actually this is the first fic I'm writing using google docs, and I copy pasted it from my google docs files, so the spacing got messed up :twilightblush:

Before I read this, what is the Gore, and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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It's rated 'teen', so I doubt it would get very bad.

I'm wondering why there's a human tag?

So far very great story 👍

Note: This is BEFORE reading the first chapter.


Hmmm, is this a story where the Main 6 are Dragons instead of boring ponies? Me likely.

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