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Stranded

Discord has faded out of existence, leaving Fluttershy stranded at his home in the Realm of Chaos. Now alone, she recounts her journey through the Realm to find her way back home again. Along the way, she will discover her own strength, and that things in the Realm are almost never what they appear to be...

Chapters (2)

PROLOGUE: "Alone" · 14th Aug 2017 · 1,018 words
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ENTRY 1: "Void" · 22nd Aug 2017 · 1,860 words
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duckmagee

duckmagee #1 · Aug 22nd, 2017 · · · ENTRY 1: "Void" ·

be interesting if fluttershy ended up becoming the new lord of chaos do to theses events

Wolfren

Wolfren #2 · Aug 27th, 2017 · · · ENTRY 1: "Void" ·

Your writing is very good, and the ideas are fitting of a chaos realm. You're beginning was... not the best, that could do with some more fleshing out, whenever possible.

Time Shield

Time Shield #3 · Sep 1st, 2017 · · · ENTRY 1: "Void" ·

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I was trying to decide how best to show what happened. I didn't just want to narrate the events of the episode this uses as a starting point, so I instead decided to write it from the point of view of Fluttershy relating what happened. It felt less tedious.