During a friendly, casual visit to Canterlot Palace, Twilight asks Celestia a question many ponies have likely pondered for years.
Why is she a Princess and not a Queen?
And Twilight receives her answer in the form of a story, long lost to the passage of time. A story about the true Queen of Equestria, an alicorn known to be as the first ever created. Her name, Queen Athena, the Queen of Harmony.
Pretty nice, scenes are well described and the concept of the original Alicorn is an interesting one.
I like how this is going. Not like any stories I've seen so far. Keep it up! :D
I like how this is going. Not like any stories I've seen so far. Keep it up! :D
...Woah.
Please continue. This is getting quite interesting.
I like this. I really like this. Needs editing, but nothing serious.