Liftoff

After having his hopes crushed over and over again, a hopeless dreamer prepares for liftoff.

Special thanks to Georg for proofreading and editing!

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Georg

Georg #1 · Jul 17th, 2017 · · ·

I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every moment of it.
--Starswirl the Bearded

Nugget

Nugget #2 · Jul 17th, 2017 · · ·

It's an interesting story, but I don't seem to quite understand the simple message behind it (besides a few thoughts that came to my mind). Flint? Can you please clarify?

Admiral Biscuit

Admiral Biscuit #3 · Jul 17th, 2017 · 1 · ·

curse and am the shattered tip

Think ya lost a letter there.

I liked this. You got me with the coverart; I also really liked the King story that used that image. Given that this is Equestria, a house-rocket is somewhat more likely ... I hope he packed snacks for the trip, wherever he's going.

I am now wondering if the house on Maple St. and this house switched places. That could make for an interesting crossover, anyways, and a probably unique method of getting a human to Equestria or a pony to Earth.

I also liked the description of the runes as slippery.

Do you think the strongarm stallions have leg-breaking cutie marks?

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