Rainbow Blitz is a tough stallion...but he does have a softer side one that very few ponies have ever seen. But the one stallion he opens up to most is his coltfriend Dusk Shine, that was until Dusk began studying under Solaris & Artemis after becoming a Prince of Equestria. Blitz begins to have doubts about their relationship, 'Does Dusk even love me anymore?
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Is "Doe's" supposed to be a typo?
Other than a few spelling mistakes and grammar, this fic is honestly one of the best blitz x dusk I have seen in a while.
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Thank u I'm glad enjoyed it.
Very nice read in terms of showing Dusk and Blitz’s relationship, though I have to say, the many run-ons, inconsistent tense use and dire lack of punctuation was oftentimes taking me out of the story
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