Fall Of Nightmare Moon

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Startech9264

Startech9264 #1 · Jul 11th, 2017 · · · The Aftermath ·

Well my innocence is gone nit that there was any innocence to start with

Dreadknight garen

Dreadknight garen #2 · Jul 11th, 2017 · · · The Aftermath ·

why does it have a comedy tag, if it contains all this fucked up stuff?

DryvernX

DryvernX #3 · Jul 11th, 2017 · · · The Aftermath ·

8291054 Removed the comedy tag. I wasn't sure.

I-C-U-P

I-C-U-P #4 · Jul 11th, 2017 · · · The Aftermath ·

It's pretty good for a short story. Well done indeed.

(Though a part of me wanted to see what would've happened between Nightmare Moon and Ember.)

DryvernX

DryvernX #5 · Jul 11th, 2017 · · · The Aftermath ·

8291135 Thanks. Glad that you at least liked it.

VampireVinyl

VampireVinyl #6 · Jul 11th, 2017 · 10 · · The Aftermath ·

I liked it, as a clopfic/rapefic that is. As a "lesson" for a bad mare? I'm sorely disappointed. Now not everyone will be enamoured with me when I say that, but here's my reason: One thousand years has passed since NightmareMoon/Princess Luna was banished to the moon. Which means, in that time, Celestia went from a gentle ruler, to a Sun Tyrant for a few years(went mad with lonliness without Luna but got ahold of herself), and in her cooldown was supposed to banish all archaic and barbaric means of dealing with bad ponies.

In essence, Celestia herself went through the laws and personally banned or made illegal slavery/execution/torture/rape/abuse/domestic violence/etc. Which means, that the very punishment she inflicted on Moon was going against and breaking her own law. In other words, in this story, the 1,000 year peace period hardly changed her at all. She happily sent a mare to be raped over and over until her mind shattered from the sheer amount, and kept her dark deed a secret from the Elements themselves.

Here's my take on what the Elements truly wanted when they left Nightmare seperate but alive: The Elements themselve saw a mare in need of redemption, to be taught the error of her ways, and be led onto the correct path. Elements. Of. HARMONY! And while I understand the six girls questioned the Element's motives, Celestia herself was the worst. She possibly knew what the Elements wanted themselves, but she didn't care. Her inner monologue was "Buck that! I want to inflict as much pain as possible on Nightmare as I can! I'll send her to the Dragonlands naked to be raped and smile happily for it!"

Sad to say, here is a prime example, of why Celestia is sometimes a true bonefied...IDIOT!!!

Redlord321