• Member Since 19th Jan, 2013
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Cocaine


Part of a machine, I am not a human being.

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Rainbow helplessly falls in love - again. It's not her fault she's a sucker for southern charm. Will AJ fit into the group? Will she find Rainbow's old secrets?

Some are better left alone.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 23 )

Will this story be as long as Appledashery?

8254313
Jesus Christ. If i live long enough to make it, sure.

in other words: probably not.

Hell yes. Fricking amazing.

Good start

8254313
Nothing will ever be that long, and its still going

A very nicely done first chapter dude, I really enjoyed it, hehehe.
I can tell this is going to be an incredible story, Rainbow and AJ. I haven't read in the sense of Appledashery, but this'll be a good one.

So good job man! :heart:

Hahahaha, woooow, this was good, damn good! Plenty of laughs, giggles and snickers, and some feel good moments.
Good job man, good job on this, can't wait for more :heart:

God. This is amazing.

Wheeeeew... damn, parents like that suck, hehe.
Good show man, good show

Huh, this chapter felt -in lack of a better term- different than the first chapters. I can't put my finger on it though.
Rainbow Dash having parents like this sucks. What sucks even more is the thought that there actually are parents like this out there in the real world.
Granted, the topic of teens getting bi-curious and discovering their sexuality is a highly complicated subject in itself, so I won't try to analyze it here.
As usual, good job with the writing itself though I like the somewhat nonchalant style of narrating, makes you think it's actually RD telling that story.

8262521
Your analysis of my stuff always has and always will be awesome. Love you. <3

Also, yes it is written at a different style on purpose. It's a dream - and I feel as though dreams should have a separate tone. Feel me?


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<333

This is really good! Can't wait for next chapter:twilightsmile:

8263934
Well...when you put it like that, I guess I have no choice but to write more. Unfortunately my ha ds have that classic writers bullshit where they only make words when they feel like it. Chapters might come three a week, or once a month. Depends when it comes to me.

I love you. <3

This is an awesome story so plz sir, more

8428583
I pretty much only write when my hands feel like it. So, uh, I really don't know when I'll be continuing. I will, at some point. Just don't know when.

I love this so far.

when you upload the next chapter?:pinkiesad2:

9966026
Sorry to say, but I'm done writing. I suggest reading "Hey, it's me" by TwilightUCrazy. This was inspired by it, and it's far better.

edit: nevermind.

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