When Rarity heads out on a business trip, she leaves Sweetie Belle behind with the simple task of vacuuming Carousel Boutique. What could possibly go wrong?
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If she can’t handle power tools, what makes anypony think Sweetie Belle can handle a vacuum cleaner? Especially when she’s pissed off?
Eh... Really cute concept, and a good central joke, but how out of character everypony was just dragged me right out of the moment.
I mean, really? That was sopposed to be Celestia?
Wow, really funny and nicely written.
I should surely insert comedy into one of my upcoming stories, if I can. But I can’t, since I’m not good at adding comedy to any of my written stories.
It deserves a fav alright.
8218743 Thanks Sango, I appreciate the fav. When it comes to your own stories, just start writing in small jokes or puns here and there. Humor doesn’t always have to be complex. You’ll get the hang of it with some practice.
8218696 Noted. Sorry if I got carried away with Celestia; I just thought it would be funny to have her being a troll.
8217759 Seems like Rarity severely overestimates Sweetie Belle’s ability to use anything properly.
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A vacuum cleaner is not something to horse around with.