Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories
Twilight and her friends have discovered that there are 6 more Elements in Equestria and is sent to find the 6 chosen spirits of freedom with the help of their friend, Sunset Shimmer, who has graduated Canterlot High School just recently and is now a permanant member of the team.
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I never read the first one, so not sure what to expect.
Bu i vote for Spike finding another mare or dragon to lvoe, sicne Rarity just taking him for Granted.
So you're starting from scratch, huh? I can respect that and that was pretty good the way you added that song near the end of the chapter to make this story more believable.
8187912 I wouldn't be so sure, I mean, this story still remains to be only a story until the readers say it's considered an improvement. I made too many mistakes with my old Rise of Equestria series in a way that it didn't make sense at all. If there's any mistakes in this story, I ask for the critics' and the readers' help and advice on what I should make in the next chapters in order to improve the mistakes I made in the previous stories months ago.
8187923 Sounds like you've been learning from your past mistakes, man. You've definitely earned my respect and a new follower
8187654 She'll stop taking him for granted later on in the series. It just takes time
8188827 Takes time? What do you mean?
8195157 I'd rather not spoil it, otherwise it'd take all the fun out of the story. You'll know soon when I've finished up with this first series
8195168 Okay then, good luck.
Is this really a reboot?
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yeah, my old one didn't make sense so I had to delete it. My writing was sloppy
I like the idea of this story and I'm interested to see, where this is going!
Nice one!!
And nothing to thanks for! :)
Keep on rockin'! \m/
Cheers!
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cheers to you, too.
Trust me, guys, the idea of Melodia wasn't mine. But if you want to know more about her, I'll gladly tell you in my blog.
Hi guys! I'm actually the person who created Melodia, she's my OC that Israel and I agreed would fit as the being of containment and slavery. Follow me on discord, Skype, here, and Google hangouts! Just pm me if you want info on how to do that!
The first chapter is good like a start of an episode, and I am curious about Princess Celestia's secret and her involvement in this. And Spike, He is the most noble kind of dragon even from the series, I do foreseen that he deserve something good in his life. Guessing whatever lays ahead might change their prospective at the location of the map. An adventure always have things that gives the protagonist a lesson to learn and adjust in life.
great chapter, the plot thickens as the plot of the story is developing
looks fine to me right now
Good work on the chapter so far
Dispite the situation, I do get the feeling that Freedom Village is some what a mirror image of Ponyville in comparison. especially that their a zoo instead of Fluttershy's animal sanctuary.
Now we getting to the point on their quest of the elements of freedom, but this is just the half of it, to be continue on the next chapter
I wonder how it fits all together in the end?
The Elements are found and the final trial has begun, will eternal succeed or will his fear overcome him.
We shall see?
Great fighting story, though I do agree on external's action, at lease he earn it.
And dang it Pinkie, you and your breaking the 4th wall gag, did dead pool say something to you girl lol.
Seems that trouble came in to freedom village in a short time, a Equestria's new record
the plot thickens, and I started to notice that their's no comments, including the previous chapters.
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This story isn't all that popular
it's the beginning of a war
This is the good story worth looking into, and the ending ends with farewells and resolving local problems. good work
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thank you
Woo hoo this is actually pretty good
Oh no