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Dustchu


I am a master of self-inserts and self proclaimed lover of Rainbow Dash, I'm also cringe as fu-

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:rainbowlaugh: He derserved that! Good story. But nothing beats them better than human techology!

Now why do those two mysterious ponies remind me of two characters I know from a certain game?:rainbowlaugh: Perfect way to take this monster out. Dustachu, have you played Bioshock Infinite by any chance?

Yep... This is now how I see fall of equestria happening.

If fall of Equestria is just a fantasy caused by an, in reality, innocent stallion's severe mental illness then it seems pretty bloody cruel of Luna to just torture him. Not to mention pointless as he is literally incapable of stopping of his own free will.

If i'm not mistaken... and i'm quite sure of that i'm not...:trixieshiftleft: the so called "god-kings" name isn't Diann.... it's Dainn:facehoof:

Not bad by any means. I like how Celestia and Luna are concerned over him, although Luna's jump to execution over a clearly delusional individual is a bit off. I can't decide if it's out of character or not for her to say-she is from an older, harsher era, but at the same time Dainn is sick, and hasn't done anything. Would she say the same of a person who says something disturbing in a high fever?

Aside from that, not bad at all.

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Heheh, true... true.

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Hell yeah I played it, first game

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All in his mind~

8179672
Yeah, I get what you and HIddenMaster are saying, and HM has a point. She's from a time where things were way harsher than they are in present day Equestria, and let's work on the assumption she hasn't had much experience dealing with the mentally ill, so to speak. She's had to rule the night, and acts as the one who plans out wars, she doesn't really have much time to deal with mentally sick ponies.

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Yeah yeah yeah I fuck that up a lot :trollestia: Let's just call him dumbass from now on, easier to remember.

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You make a good point, but I think I may have explained it a bit above.

8179764 I thought as much. Those two remind me of the Lutece Twins so much, it's uncanny. Scary really.

Finally a Caribou based story with some fantasy! It's like those sex-deluded cloppers can't make anything better than rapefics.

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That's why people like me exist, we strive to give you guys something decent to read :trollestia: We take shit, and make it less shitty.

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*makes OoOOOoo noises*
Its all in your mind~

Lol well this explains everything. My hats off to you my good man.

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Sweet business~

Interesting concept, but it's supposed to be "Dainn," not Diann

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Thanks. And I tend to mess up his name a lot, apologies.

Well this certainly locks down a LOT of the loose ends and closes most if not all the plot holes (no dark puns intended) that the FoE stories have. The severity of which depends on the story but anyway.

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Uuuuuh... thanks. :yay: Is that good?

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8179672

Luna is from a harsher era, and to be fair Dustchu said it already. In the old days psychology did not exist, and delusions can lead to something dangerous. Basically people like Neon Crystal were put to death or forced labor all the time. Plus, Neon Crystal insulted Luna's only family, and instead of breaking into his padded room and breaking a leg, she just gave him a nasty nightmare, a cruel mercy, but still mercy.

Also, just because science has determined why you are an asshole and that you cannot stop yourself from being an asshole, does not mean that you are no longer an asshole. All it means is that we now know why.

8181696 My god!:pinkiegasp: That felt like a close one:ajsleepy: There are so many dirty fics out there that when I look at this, I couldn't tell if this was really happening in the fic or not, and it was horrific!:twilightoops: Lucky you didn't go on that route:pinkiehappy:

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Hehehe, that's what I was going for~ :yay: Hahah

8232905 That twist at the end though, WTF!?:rainbowderp: That was kind of weirdly disgusting, extremely painful, and a little sexy at the same time. I don't really know how painful such a thing in, but I do know that exploding organs of anything must be super painful:pinkiesick:

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Oh it was extremely painful, at least for the caribou and Dainn :trollestia: As long as I write these... they will never win...
And in the rare case I do...
...
They'll wish they hadn't~

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They'll wish they hadn't~

What voice is that in? Usually in some stories, the tilde represents a sexy tone:derpyderp2: And also italicized.

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Dark and sexy~

8234471 Well, it seems we're going on this path:rainbowkiss:

What would you prefer, dark and sexy, or milk and sexy? Because I could provide you with either~:trollestia:

8234471
I'm talking about Chocolate of course~:ajsmug:

People like that deserve such a gruesome death, they deserve nothing more but that, and good work.

I would think that this would have been the correct scenario for every FOE picture, comic, and fic that was made all to be delusions of the insane king as this totally fits the bill perfectly of a deluded fantasy to which many need to wake up to. XD

Ohhhh that was a mind fuck...
HA!

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