I can say this story is a vary good read.
it has some cannon in it from the comics just to make it vary interesting.
exultant righting Captain_Hairball

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It's a hard balance to maintain.

Well, this story convinced me to follow you. I'm really impressed by your skills and can't wait to read more of your work~

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Thank you so much!

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You're welcome :3

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True dat!

Her parents encouraged Rainbow sleep in Fluttershy’s room that night. The two young mares made gentle, quiet love to the sound of Zephyr’s heartbroken sobs, and when they were done, the lay tangled together, looking into each others eyes.

I know I hate Zephyr but damn son

Fluttershy tittered. “I think dad’s just glad he didn’t have to give his precious little filly to some other stallion.”

Something tells me that I would adopt this reasoning from Fluttershy's dad when I become a dad in the future

Great story! Ending felt a bit rushed, and I'm probably one of the few who prefers Tree Hugger being shipped with Fluttershy over Rainbow, but ah well!

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Thanks!

I'm still learning, as a writer. And Flutterhugger's a good ship! They're all good ponies are wonderful.

Any spanking in this?

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I don't remember! D: I mean there's a good chance there is because I wrote it, but I mostly remember a lot of grinding and hoofing in the sex scenes.

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This is probably a legit continuity error. I'll address it if the stars align and I can remember it when I have time.

The two young mares made gentle, quiet love to the sound of Zephyr’s heartbroken sobs,

Oh no

Great story! Really creative and fun read