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InvertedAxis


This is an alt account for posting smut but all I will say is that I am a carbon based intelligent organism of earthly origin, made mostly of water.

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Very good. Excited for the rest.

you son of a b***** I know you eat my chips

2 spelling errors I found
two mares that had rapped her
beat red > beet red

It's some neat depravity right there! :pinkiesmile: Though Twilight certainly just made a big mistake. She completely IGNORED the CMC going to that store even though she said she wanted them away from it. Then again that was probably out of panic. Well, seems some fillies get to ride the tentacle~ :trollestia:

"two mares that had rapped her " She was forcefully subjected to their horrible mixtape.

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It was... not super hot fire, that's for sure. They need to go listen to more Eminem.

*imagines sequal* hmm I see a lot of hazmat ponys in my minds version :pinkiecrazy:

Also I ate the last of your chips last Friday, sorry about that.

I... i left those out so that they'd poison the mice around here, are... are you okay dude?

Also I ate the last of your chips last Friday, sorry about that.

I died😅

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I died😅

Oh...

Oh god no!

Where are you! I’ll send help! The police. The firemen. I’ll even send the Navy seals but YOU HAVE TO LIVE!

Maybe next could be Scootaloo and/or Twilight impregnating the other CMC?

Are you ever gonna show the babies being born?

She shuddered as she made her way to the shower. First she would clean herself up, then deal with the consequences of last night as well as the two mares that had rapped her and temporarily ponynapped her.

Raped*

I'll admit this is a interesting story. I enjoyed every single chapter you put into it. Stories like this makes me imagine what a crossover story would be like with my heroine Daring Do. I'd have to admit I'd definitely see her struggling with this stories enemy or even finding out about the enemy.

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