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Secret of the Sun

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This story is a sequel to The Deepest Darkest Secrets

After all these years Twilight finally discovers the truth, that Celestia was lying to her, but when she demands answers she might not like wat she hears...

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Lotus Moon #1 · Mar 8th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Sweet Celestia this is an amazing read it

Silver Inkwell #2 · Mar 8th, 2017 · · ·

8006504
Thank you.

Courage Fire #3 · Mar 8th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Interesting concept, but you had a lot of spacing issues when different people talked, that giant expositi9n bomb was literally a big blob of text, and Luna just.... showed up.

There's potential here, but it needs work.

Lunar Eclipsed #4 · Mar 9th, 2017 · · ·

you need to go through this and fix all the dialogue i cant tell whos saying what when

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Artist #5 · Sep 14th, 2017 · · ·

I loved it

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