While going to the market, Fluttershy meets a pony who is going through a tough time. This ponies parents are getting a divorce. Fluttershy helps this pony as best as she can. This story shows that a little kindness can help a lot.
Hello, I'm Furryart! I'm mostly considered a kind person and I'm Christian! Anyway, I started writing at a very young age. The stories were intresting in a way! Hope you enjoy my stories now! :D
While going to the market, Fluttershy meets a pony who is going through a tough time. This ponies parents are getting a divorce. Fluttershy helps this pony as best as she can. This story shows that a little kindness can help a lot.
This was cute and kind of heartwarming. There were a handful of typos, but none that took me out of the story (I'll point them out if you'd like).
However, the... only major issue I had with the story is its length.
While I understand why it's short, I couldn't quite buy into how quickly the filly opened up to Fluttershy.
I feel, had the story been at least an extra thousand words longer, it could've been much more impactful.
Long story short: I'd suggest adding more interaction. That scene in the house could've been much more in-depth.
However, as it stands... eh, it's fine. It's solid. I liked it. Harmless and heartfelt in the end.
7996534 thank you I'm glad you liked the story