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Great prologue to the original dude, you did more than was needed and then some. But the descent was a slow and torturous one for Twilight... or whatever she became. In the end it was expected... but definitely well deserved!
It's always wonderful to see how a story changes over time and how it reaches the end, but it is also quite sad because the story has reached the end.
Though in this case, it is not truly the end, simply a new beginning...
That link leads to Blink, btw. Also, if you had the idea to highlight this portion, you are truly wise... or just lucky.
8109893 that sounds like the ending narration to Predacons Rising. Are you a Transformers fan, too?
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Why yes, yes I am.
8110587 interesting. I know the fandoms have been pretty friendly, but it's so rare to find someone who's a fan of both. Especially one who's enough of a fan to make cross-references.
Out of curiosity, what do you think of the films?
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They were alright, I guess. Not really a fan of Optimus's character in Age of Extinction, though. Nor the Dinobots...
8110959 yeah, they were wasted. I think with better writing, optimus' change in character could've been something amazing. Kind of like what he's become inn the IDW verse.
I'm trying to keep an open mind about 5 though.
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I would just like to see where 5 takes us, maybe into Quintesson territory?
8111051 you haven't heard? "the creator" or "the maker" or whatever the final title for her is, her real name is Quintessa. They're definitely going there.
the only thing that really has me concerned is the girl. Izzy, I think. she feels... tacked on? and people have been comparing her to Rey; to be honest, I didn't like Force Awakens that much and didn't find Rey compelling. now, if she turns out to be more like Jyn Urso, then I'm cool with it. Rogue One was awesome.
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Rogue One was awesome, but then they killed my favorite character I call "blind Jedi dude."
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Well here's another fan of both fandoms.
8111903 cool! A couple more and we could form a group or something.
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Who would get the honors of writing the story where BW Dinobot ends up in Equestria?
8111939 I don't think that situation would end well... He ate his own clone!
A funnier story would be waspinator ending up in equestria
Haunting. That is the best word I can think of to describe this story...
Chilling and horrifying, yes, but haunting because it is entirely plausible. The descent into madness can and has happened to people, even good people.
It is all I can do not to think about it tonight as I try to sleep, against the unknown monsters lurking in my mind, waiting for a lapse in sanity.
You, sir, have done what the original Blink did for me, on an even worse level. Blink was a sobering and mortifying concept, but this? This made it far more real. And that closeness to reality is what truly earns this fic it's Horror tag.
Bravo.
8117823 thank you for giving me my smiles for the day
8117851 A pleasure!
But it's 1AM here, and the darkness is scary
Mostly because I'm not entirely certain I can't see a crazed pair of large violet eyes staring at me from the invisible corners of shadow
How you sleep the night after writing a fic like this is beyond me!
And just a note, yours is one of several stories I've recently blazed through in a streak, and I'm slowly getting the motivation and confidence to attempt writing my own little tale
So thank you too!
Oh my stars, this is so horrible and yet so compelling.
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yeah, what you said! im not good writing opinions, but yours are the closest to the ones I have.
I am going to have to agree with all three of the previous comments, this was truly an amazing piece, I have read many stories on this website ~40 and this one is atleast top 5, you are an amazing writer, and you have more than done the original author justice with this piece of art, I will have to keep looking at the stories you make, because if you make any more stories of this quality, I might not want to read any other authors pieces
Well... rest in piece, Twilight. You deserve it. You have been through enough.
Honestly, I don't understand the appeal. This series started out great but it quickly became incredibly repetitive.
Plenty of times it felt gory just for the sake of gore rather than actually contributing anything to the story itself.
Rest in peace, Twilight.
Great job, author!