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Akula. A Russian word that means: shark. A nickname given to an Ace pilot named Andrei Markov. On Earth, he was responsible for the deaths of many in his campaign for revenge.

But what would happen if this dangerous pilot was transported to Equestria?
What if this killer was once the greatest hero in Equestrian history?

My first fanfic submission. I apologize for any misuse of category/character tags. Constructive criticism is appreciated (if it sucks, please tell me why). And last but not least, I did not make any profit from this and all items belong to their respective owners (Akula, Warwolf and all Ace Combat characters-Project Aces) (My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic-Hasbro)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 21 )

Hmmm...will read later....

I'm interested.

Predicting the response: "Um... Vot?"

Thanks a lot everyone!

>>Dr. Vodka (not sure if I tagged you correctly. If not, how do I tag someone?)
I wanted to separate the flashbacks from the story with a border lining in order to make it less confusing but I couldn't figure out how, so I changed the text. And yes I plan on continuing this story.

Keep reading & let me know if there's anything I should improve on, eh?
:twilightsmile:

you still working on this? It's good so far and I'd love to see more.

Southern Wing (still not sure if tagged correctly)....
I'm still working on the next chapter.... But I'm also lazy and prone to procrastination so, it might take a while
sorry

ah ok. i have a feeling it'll be worth the wait. It is an interesting concept.

Here it is. Chapter 2.
Sorry for being tardy with it :twilightblush: I had.... other priorities. Now that I'm free for a while, maybe I can update more often
Also, if somepony would be kind enough to teach me how to tag another guy's name in the comments, that would be cool.:pinkiesmile:

Finally a new chapter
Markov is gpoing to have a good/bad day in equestria

Continue the good work:rainbowkiss:

keep up the good work mate!

well the gary-stu I don't partculary mind now, but try to get the posible psicological problems that he may have or something like that and make a big problem out of it

hmm. interesting update wonder how celestia will respond?

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Most I can get out of him now is confusion since he was once a fighter pilot but got thrust into a world of magic. I'm gonna make it so that he's still trying to grasp the concept. Thanx for the suggestion, by the way. :twilightsmile:

Great... Now I almost feel bad about shooting him down with trinity...
Almost.

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:rainbowlaugh: Didn't he get shot down with the Vulcan machine gun?

2538575 I've been dueling him with the PAK FA and EW1. I try to ram the missal down his tailpipe then shoot the Warhead down with another trinity. :derpytongue2:

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I can't imagine that would be healthy for the White house

So is this permanently on hiatus, cancelled or what? :applejackunsure:

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