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enamis


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What happened to Twilight when she finally got accepted into that amazing private school?

Did she meet amazing friends? Check.
Did she do amazingly in all her studies? Check.
Did she have a very fiery outburst? Check.
Did she laugh it off? Check.
Did she get into some trouble? Check.
Did she save the school from Celestia's evil uncle? Che...WAIT WHAT?



Read and find out.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 25 )

I LOVE THIS! I also love the fact that you just didn't copy and paste Harry potter here, you actually took somecreative liberty and that's what makes this AWESOME!

Nexus Nyx Nayma...Is that an intentional reference to "Past Sins"?

1174652 thanks :twilightsmile:
1175255 ok you got me... I coudnt rezist naminhg her nyx but thats about the only reference to past sins there is :applejackunsure:

1175900 Are you sure? Remember that the headmaster of Celestia's School/Head of the Cult of Nightmare Moon in that story was named Spell NEXUS.

1177987 wow really...? :rainbowhuh: well now you have a perfect example of my empty mind...

I seriously had the urge to play this at the scene with Celestia and the students with the baby dragons, and it honestly made the scene even better.

Great chapter:rainbowkiss:

All told, very 'Harry Potter-ish' but divergent enough to be enjoyable. It's interesting to see Twilight's early life, elements of her adult personality are clear.

1235606 i have to say i've barely scratched the surface :twilightsmile: wait till i start fickering whit the history of Equestia and this mysterious 'uncle' :rainbowkiss:

Lemme guess. Nightshade is an alicorn.

Also first post!:pinkiehappy:

So Twilight's History teacher is Fluttershy's father, eh? At least he seems to be better at the subject than the ghost of Professor Binns was...actually, he reminds me a lot of Flitwick.

Is it just me or has Everyone read Past SIns?
I know its good and all but WOW! :pinkiehappy:

Do Whisps have a 144 character limit? :trollestia:

Flutters! :yay:

i don't know whether or not that last line was sarcasm

1385913 which one do you mean?

1385916 at the end of the second chapter i wrote it when i finished reading it... by the way great story so far cant wait to read more, though you might want to think about putting a crossover tag on this since it is so closely related to harry potter

1386104 oh that! well, it was pretty... well... it wasnt sarcastic lets put it that way, its was somewhat of a foreshadowing, just to hint at the entire relationship of Nyx and Mandy

Celestia's evil uncle? Reading.

Great story, the only thing I don't like is the fact that it is just a little too Harry Potterish. Everything else seems fine to me.:twilightsmile:

1921924 Thanks anyway, but don't worry, it doesn't go any more Potterish (well maybe just a little bit more, their starting to blend together :rainbowderp:)
And yea... Thanks for the read and stay tooned for the next chapter, whenever it might be! :rainbowlaugh:

Scenes with filly Twilight and baby Spike absolutely make my day :heart:
:twilightsmile: :moustache:

I love all these little oddities that your adding. Unique wisps that are only viewable to a few unicorns. Aurora who's probably Celestia in disguise, shennanigans and a magical fly-swatter... most excellent.

1143311
Uhm i don't want to rain into your parade but wouldn't the line

Did she meet amazing friends? Check.

make it Alternate Universe itself?

1926448 Your story is awsome! Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

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