Canterlotian and all its Districts - The shinning jewels of Fallen Equestria are no more...
Queen Dawnbreaker has been assassinated and her her daughter Nova - foalnapped. All blame falls upon their Royal Protector Rainbow Dash who has been sent to execution. But little do they know, that the city has fallen into the oppressive hooves of the Corrupted Elements that have come to power after the fall of the Queen.
As the underworldly plague rips what is left of Equestria to shreds, Rainbow, along with a rag-tag team of Loyalists, set off to find the missing foal and restore the land to its once shimmering glory. But little does the prismatic mare know, darkness is rising.
A Dishonored crossover, no knowledge necessary. Feedback, much appreciated! First two chapter proofed by Landee & Midge.
Interesting
I was fully expecting this to be called Dashonored...
2271481 Yeah, that's kind of like the unofficial name, I figured I'd call it Dishonored so people can find it.
2271463 I'm happy you liked it
2271481
I've never played dishonored, but this makes me want to
This is pretty well done, barely any spelling or grammatical errors.
If I had any suggestions, it would be to try and be a little more descriptive. When you were describing the environment and places early in the chapter, there was one or two lines for everything. Granted there are times where this is better, though a more meaty description can help in pulling someone into that environment.
Another suggestion would be trying to use more differentiated adjectives. An example would be how throughout the chapter, you always used the word 'grey'. Perhaps you could use other terms like pallid, ashen, smoky, or drained. Not using the same adjective over and over can make your story seem more professional and serious.
Also for later chapters, FiMFiction uses hr in [ ] as the tag for line breaks and 'horizontal rules' as opposed to the <br> tag used in HTML and other things.
Hope this helps.
2288853 Wow, I'm really glad you liked it!
And yeah, I was never the one for fancy descriptions of the environment 
My brain has two settings: Way too much or none at all! But thank you, I'll try even harder on the chapters to come! 
hmmm
Going to have to try that...
OH MY GOD, I did not see that one coming,
well played sir
holy cow why have more people not read this.
what you have written here is truly amazing the technology makes sense the setting works and the level of description is excellent, you sir have created one of the most enjoyable reads i have had in ages. congrats.
3328630 Why thank you!
Unfortunately I cant guarantee when the next chapter will be up, but please do stick around until then, I shall try to not disappoint 
Ha! A crossover of the game and MLP! This really turned my head when I started to remember the plague victims
on the game. Now, I can't wait until a new chapter arises!
ASSASIN! HELP!
FUCK.
Nice Adaptation. Sorry I hadn't commented before.
Who first came up with the idea for Fallen Equestria?