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Princess Celestia formally requests the personal court of Princess Luna (The Servants of Shadow) to track down her missing sister.
This is the top secret mission code named: Moon Unit Zappa.
(A personal project that panders to some of my characters.)
(Cancelled due to the stupidity that was the plot.)
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Oh, Yay!
This going to be awesome!
Thank you, dear sister! More Diamond Dancer!
Great to se you back, too, Sis!
Wow, Dinky sure had a bad attitude! I'm wondering how Luna tolerates her. She must be very good at necromancy!
7977842 spoiler much? Geez.
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Oh, I'm sorry! I thought it was talked about in a previous chapter as to what Dinky's skill was. I truly apologize if I ruined anything, for you or anyone else. Or for the story.
sorry
7982254 No problem. I usually spoil stuff too
It looks great to me, sis. Just a few minor grammar errors but nothing that takes away from the story. Good pacing and I'm liking the how you're developing this....so secretive and sinister!
Bright Spark.....not quite sure about him yet. I'm enjoying the way you're telling the story from different perspectives.
That's a cleaver girl. that Diamond! Sometimes a bit too bold, but her hearts in the right place. That's why I like her so much!
I love all the little details of the characters you've shown here! It really makes them come alive.
At last Bright Spark is useful. too. That clairvoyance spell is cool.
DD is a tough little girl, but so very caring and sweet. (Don't tell her I said that)
I'm sooo enjoying all these characters and scenes you are introducing as our band of rescuers continues on their quest. Such wonderful descriptions make this story so intriguing! Great work, Lady Rarity!
This sounds like a good set up chapter....Dinky knows something!
I'm loving this! More character and world building....yes! Good thing Diamond has such great hearing; she probably just saved everypony! More, please!
Oh my gosh! This is fabulous work, darling, even unedited! So thrilling and frightening! I really like Virga's ice wings.
I love the Raging Ricochet! Diamond really is a cleaver girl! Pinball Filly! lol! I like how you ended this chapter, too. A literal cliff-hanger.
More please!
Diamond!
I am continually amazed at the depth and skill of your writing, Dear Lady! Bravo!
Hilarious.
Poor Virgra! I understand how he feels. Hopefully the centipony can help them find Luna and Diamond.
I love the cliffhangers in your story. It makes it even more thrilling!
Needs more. . . Luna. . .
Way to go, Diamond! Now just get yourself out of there, little filly!
Wow, Sis! Just.....wow! So exciting!
Good for you, Diamond! I'm glad you stood up to her!
So. . . Dinky and Shade may be related. . .
Wow! Virga is really scary. Glad he is on Luna's side!
Could the voice be the mystery pony that the ferry pony mentioned was traveling with Luna? Or another monster?!
This is just a terrific story, sis! Really loving the character and world building you do so well. Good pacing with the action, too! I can't wait for more!
Diamond can't be gone, can she?!
MOAR!
Dinky is just a horrible pony! Poor Diamond! I'm glad she's not dead. I hope she gets to give Dinky what she deserves!
"That poor vulture was forced to eat the same meal over and over again. She could only imagine what kind of terrible bird related horror that vulture must have inflicted to deserve such a fate. Truly, this was a place of nightmares." I think that's my favorite joke so far, though it seems more like the sort of sentiment Nettleglum would have.
I should say--as the person who played the version of Dinky that inspired her portrayal in this series... wow! Even I never made her that misanthropic. I guess this Dinky is a little older and has learned how to take her inward-directed anger and... turn it outward?
I think it's neat the Night Court is getting stories about it. :) And neat that Dinky finally has a formal place in it.
In this story, Dinky keeps calling Diamond an idiot. In roleplay, though, Dinky didn't think of Diamond that way. I had to think back to remember the cause of their enmity. It's that Diamond was good friends with Derpy, and hated it when Dinky was cruel to her mother or to others who didn't deserve it, so she ragged on Dinky for that... and Dinky reacted defensively by hating Diamond Dancer. Of course, it's your story and you can cast your relationships however you like.
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DERPS!!! <3<3<3
Dinky is hovering around agnsty teen in this universe. She is also quite evil, (You can see this doesn't quite follow the original story, as Clara has been left) and assumes the role of an antagonist and Diamond's personal rival. She is an anti-hero of sorts, but she's certainly still a hero!
Oh my gosh. This relationship is not going well.
I wonder how my Dinky would react to that sandwich question. Lemme check.
DINKY: How do sandwiches taste? Really. That's really what we're talking about now? Nothing else more important you can think of to gnash your teeth about--like something actually, you know, RELEVANT TO OUR SITUATION?
DIAMOND shrugs.
DINKY: Okay, fine. Sandwiches. You do know they're made of separate things, right? Like, layers? Kinda by definition. Two layers of bread and something in between. And bread is... really, it's more about how it smells than how it tastes. It tastes like it smells, but not as much. Maybe a little nuttier. Stars, you don't know what ANYTHING tastes like. How am I supposed to describe tastes in terms of anything you know if you can't smell OR taste anything? But wait--didn't you use to be able to taste and smell stuff, before your Icarus disease started messing you up? What, you never had a sandwich before that? I know you were poor, but it's not exactly a high-class food.
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Evil, but still a hero, huh? I prefer my heroes non-evil!
Yeah, hi there. :)
Diamond Dancer really was a great character, huh? I'm glad you're still telling stories about her.
You're the Last One alive, finish the Mission, dinky!
Nice to See that Diamond is still in the Game
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A personal Project darling. I write for the love of writing sometimes, not because someone is watching. <3
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I believe the proper term is "writer" darling.
Yay, Diamond! I just knew she would find her Princess! She is the true hero of the group. I sure hope Dinky gets what she deserves, from Luna and Diamond!
Such a wonderful story, dear sister!
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Not everyone will like what you write. If I like something I'm writing and even one person likes it I keep writing regardless of all the dislikes.
Jajajaja xd nice!!!!
And poor Bright Spark.
Jajaja xD
Awwww how thoughtful of you, it's not every day you get a grave. I envy you,D.
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Me too <3