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Opius Malikai


Reborn. I have changed into (hopefully) a better writer.

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They spoke of an old warrior, a thousand years ago. A dragon that had powers unlike any that had been seen before. On powerful enough to take on an army by himself. He was more powerful than gods and goddesses themselves. This warrior disappeared before he was able to change the world. With him went the movement he had built up. As the fourth princess of Equestria is crowned this force wakes up and starts a movement that would change Equestria forever.

Another human acting villainous story. Inspired by I Will Hunt You Down, Time Ticks On and many many others.

Criticism appreciated and wanted.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 32 )

4876837 I'm working on fixing it, it used to be a lot longer but I lost the save for it i'll publish it after I think it's good and close to how it was before.

Interesting plot developing, you will have more, soon, right?? :D

4882686 *Crosses fingers* I shall be watching for it... :D And watching YOU. *Presses 'follow' button.

Stark Stalkified.

I just have one thing to say... MOAR!:flutterrage:

4884026 I've already been working on the next chapter, hopefully will be up tonight.

Not often that one sees a skyrim crossover, then again I saw this one because I checked the war of understanding and this caught my eye.

:trixieshiftleft: ... :trixieshiftright: ... You have my attention.

*presses like button repeatedly* WHY IS IT NOT GETTING MORE LIKES!?!!?!?!?!?!??!?!

4895148 I hope that's a good reaction to my story.:pinkiesmile: and if not could you tell me what you didn't like?

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4895165 I'm just confused at how they can be so dumb
even though its true

4895174
If you think about it, his imprisonment wasn't exactly commom knowledge. Nightmare Moon was at least an "old mare's tale" while he was locked in a basement for longer.

Good job, though i think that just giving him attributes of a dragon, with some main power, would have been enough for a LoHAH/LoHAV character.

4895333 I wanted to make him powerful enough to compete with some other things coming in the story besides Celestia.:pinkiecrazy:
Although I may get rid of the second scroll idea.

4895573 ok, that's better. Thank you. He doesn't seem as cobbled togeyher as before.

4895785 I've officially scrapped the second scroll so so far what I have to write with is a Magic Resistant, Scales sharper than diamond, Winged, Shouting, Trained with a sword, Fire-breathing, Dragon-man...It could be a lot more overpowered...like umbra

4895984
umbra codes the multiverse, he's meant to be OP; but his weakness is holy light... or light based magic... i don't know, i'm not his writer.

anyway, what's your character's weakness? :ajsmug:

4895984
also, you can credit most of those powers to being a dragon-man (and dragon-man isn't a power, it's a state of being; just sayin') so, all in all, he's not too overpowered, in my eyes. :twilightsmile:

4896118 One weakness is obviously the Elements Of Harmony, and the "New Characters" I have planned will have things he's weak to. But a basic one is that he's not invincible he can be killed if he suffers a great injury. But it's not as much of a problem with the armor he has on.

4896118 One more thing, do you think it's appropriate to write his first backstory chapter now?

4896429
Yes. If I were writing this I would put the first past chapter here.

Comment posted by Opius Malikai deleted Jan 4th, 2015

my imagination: imagine this but with out the lasers
the meaning of this since he is part dragon can he blow fire? that is why i imagine this

And of course it goes no further. This has to be the thirtieth frigging story that remains uncompleted that gets to a good part, mainly when a scorned protagonist ends up finding Celestia and is ready for a bout with her.

Lazy bastards.

"One thousand years can get you such a crick in the neck!"

thank you for the Alladin reference

5694573 Sometimes all it takes is to take the first step.

Interesting story, would like to see it get updated.

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