Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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I tried, but i failed at being interested in this story.
Don't really have anything to bitch about for this chapter except the truly odd coincidence about his house and humvee both somehow landing upright. Other than that and the lack of languaga barrier (but that might just be more of a personal preference) I really don't have any reason to dislike this chapter at all.
la escena de los lobos un poco exagerada al final, pero bien en general
This main character seems to talk to himself a lot in these beginning chapters, to the point where I'm worried there is misuse of quotation marks for the description of the surroundings. The third-person omniscient POV would suit describing the MC's surroundings better than them physically talking about where they are and what they're doing as it happens. I certainly hope this is not a recurring theme throughout the rest of the story because the description of the plot is pretty good, and I'd hate to see such things go to waste due to the offputting writing style.
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The first chapters are pure shit. However I do think the more recent chapters are easier to digest.
Ha!
Now that’s just insulting. XD
Inter-dimensional Travel! Electricity now included!
Edit: I just remembered he had solar panels, now I feel stupid.
Good mountain bikes are already easily liftable with one hand
From this I can tell this story is gonna get good
The thank cthulu got me good
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One of my buddies brings a 1911 when hunting overnight so when the coyotes get to loud just fire a shot
Just saying I may or may not kill for an Arizona...
Also in Massachusetts, they don't sell the 99¢ cans. I was disappointed to learn this
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That is completely retarded. What are they the dollar twenty nine ones or just the gallon jugs?
Praise be to God's prophet and our lord and savior: Cthulu.
Cthulu stirs from his slumber to give you a tentacled thumbs up before going back to his nap
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Chuthulu gave you strength to get through these first few chapters, praise be.
Oh nice, pre show canon.
I... Wonder if animals would actually react in a sorta way of "Damn, that dude crazy, we need to leave him alone!" Or do they not really care?
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Yeah, they know.
This was a decent chapter
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as far as we can tell, dudes been alone for at least half a year probably more than a year. First chapter says those three brothers were the first humans he saw in 4 months. yeah, isolated people can start talking to themselves after less than 1 month, just to hear a voice.
Guy got bitten by an infected but wasn’t infected himself? Is he a patient zero or omega man?
Poor Fluttershy! She got really scared.