Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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I think it could work just no overbearing harems alright?
Ya it baack, love it
Excellent chapter, those pants are gonna rebel if they keep getting stretched to the breaking point.
And for the anthro switch... I personally am not a fan of them, but making a combat scene with midget horses would be quite the challenge.
Big Mac going after Hank?
The thought amuses me
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Im with frost here
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No worries, there would be no harems.
I wouldn't mind either way, however please stick to at most two "romantic" partners if you decide to do it.
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That's the plan, I decided from the beginning that a harem is not what I would be going for in the story.
It would be better anthro.
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Thank God. Either way I like the story (whichever way you take it) still a bit confused on why he's a Thicc boi though?
Sure. Do it.
I'll be blunt bro, I don't read anthro stories. He's a bit O.P. but I VERY MUCH prefer it like this. If it becomes an anthro story, I will not continue reading it. I only read one other anthro story and I HATED IT (The Human/Pony War). Oh and do NOT base any moves off of For Honor. The accuracy of that game is 0%. It suffers from 'No Armor Syndrom' basically where armor does not exist and every hit draws blood, which is the absolute HIGHEST level of bullshit. Historically, there are no weapons which could penetrate straight through plate armors AND the chain underneath, AND the base layer of Gambeson! They did not exist.
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Sorry to hear that you dislike anthro so much, but nothing is set in stone yet and a change probably won't happen. I also know that For Honor has that problem and thats why I was only going to base some of his move set off of some of the knight characters. Armor, if present, would work intended.
There is no reason to worry about armor and weapons not working as they are meant to, I just did a presentation on medieval arms and armor in one of my history classes, I know that For Honor is full of bullshit. I'm only going to take inspiration from the move sets because they are much easier to write and much easier for the average reader to visualize. I feel like I would have a really hard time writing Hank properly using the Schlussel guard and using it to pop open a particularly defensive foe.
A good compromise is that you could have them wield swords and junk while standing on their back hooves.
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I did initially think of that but I've kind ruled it out, I'm currently brain storming a couple ideas that I think may work. I'm trying my hardest because I the more I think the more I realize that I don't want to turn it anthro.
8596333 Nice reference. I always wondered why the Royal Guard never wear any gambeson under their plate armor.
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I've wondered that as well. I guess my explanation has always been that it's more a decorative piece and just a uniform, not a piece that would be carried into battle.
8596823 Let's go with that.
If u are going to do this leave the old story up and place a link to the new story talking about your reasoning that way you don't just delete your hard work cause I know u put a lot of effort in these chapters if the length is anything to go by.
sure go for it,but please ohh lord please make the guards useless, after all they are
Idk. I don't really know how them being vaguely human shaped would change the dynamic between human and pony.
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I feel the same. I'm still reluctant however to make any changes, I will give the final word next Wednesday with the next chapter.
Great chapter!
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Why thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Enjoy is only half if it!
Please make more I really enjoy this
Ok, I do not understand why this whole female hips and ass thing... I mean it's such a bizarrely random and strangely specific nonpoint that has nothing to do with anything yet the story still continues to being it up. Also it's just so happens the girls love it so it just screams self insert problems to me.
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Its not so much self insert issues as it is in my ability to write things subtlety. What my original intent was is to have something from Hank's normal life still bothering him. I thought a good way would be something that goes directly against the masculinity Hank has and wants to me seen by. The only issue is that in 2017 especially I had fuck all idea how to implement a point like that in any subtle way that would fit in kinda naturally. I'm not much better with writing now but, yes, I realize how out of place and down right unneeded that point is. Yeah it makes no sense and other than a re-write of these chapters (Which might me a thing in the future) I have no way of fixing this issue other than toning it down in the later chapters, which I attempt to do.
Czy pojawią się teastrale? chciałbym zobaczyć jak się z nim będą dogadywać w końcu wydaje się że mają podobną kulturę i lubię widzieć inne gatunki oprócz kucyków. Co do historii jest bardzo dobra, niestandardowa z człowiekiem który jest badasem i nie dogaduje się że wszystkimi kucykami jak robią w prawie każdym innym fanficu, mieszka w Everfree kolejna rzadkość i nie bierze gówna od nikogo. Szczerze go lubię i jego podejście. Gramatyka.... nie mogę wiele powiedzieć bo nie wiem czy błędy są twoje czy tłumacza. Fabuła i tempo są w porządku. Brutalność - jestem fanem Warhammera 40k i po obejrzeniu Primal z niewielkim zaskoczeniem i rozbawieniem.... lepiej przestanę bo już to co napisałem jest niepokojące. W każdym razię! kontynuuj dobrą robotę i wszystkiego dobrego z Polski!.
Loving this story so far
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Glad to hear it, hopefully the poor writing in the forst few chapters wasn't too unbearable.
Shipping
Unless the ponies have medical knowledge that MC isn’t aware of…
Guy must be getting low on ammunition and medical supplies by now. He was well scavenged, but post apocalyptic doesn’t mean well stocked. Ever.