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The story is amazing, keep it up.
Few things. Whole story feels like it's freaking Concord. You need to find editor. And a few ponies are out of character, humans too. I mean, twilight, of all ponies, rushes help CMC without thinking and asking questions, AND using a spell that was going to main, if not outright kill, one of the humans. I'll add more things later.
its really convenient that they were able to get three humans that have dead, oh and no mention of the fact that they are going to turn into equines.
Anthony earth pony ?
Dustin pegasus
Andrian unicorn ?
This chapter hit pretty hard. Very well written good job.