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needs to be 120% cooler, add some cider and shes ready to go.
Cool 1st to comment, likin the personal quest armour.
8074995 > Thanks for the comment and the read. Just a few points from me. When I was in "sarge" was still used. That was how I could tell the difference between old and new soldiers when they addressed me. Not every reader has a military background, so I am not writing solely for a military audience. If I wanted to do that I could get a lot more elaborate using acronyms, nomenclatures, phonetic alphabet etc. Which would just bring about a need for me to explain more the I really want to. (Why would a Staff Sargent be taking orders from a Sargent? In this story he does because he trusts the judgement of his friends.) As far as the first names , I did it for simplicity due to my memory problems. These are the first names of soldiers I served with and modeled the characters after. Also just an FYI, at my primary duty station there were five of us in the same battalion all from the same town. We all enlisted at different times and ended up together. At one point there were seven of us at an airport in German at the same time. (Both incoming and outgoing.) Granted three of them were JarHeads. But this is coming from a town with a population under 10000. I understand this doesn't happen a lot but it does happen. I am simply writing a fun story on my spare time because I enjoy writing it. I simply hope the people reading it enjoy it as much as I do. I have several "Military" based stories in the works as well. I could see about publishing them if your interested. Those stories are geared more towards a military audience where explanations wouldn't be needed. Albeit, most of them are science fiction.
P.S. I see you used the word POST and not Base so I am guessing you are either Army or Marines. I was 11M Army. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story for what it is, and are able to see past my "lazy" writing.
Thank you for your service. if you want to put those stories up, please do. this book is one of my all-time favorites, and it always will be. its very well written, and ill admit, it actually drove to to write my own story. so thank you, and please. Keep up the amazing work.
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