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Madame Hellspawn


Starlight Pony is best glimmer

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It started when ponies started going missing. It was small towns and villages that reported them first.

After an attack on Manehattan of seemingly unknown origins, The Regal Sisters begin talks of reviving an ancient order meant to defend Equestria and the rest of the known world from threats deemed 'other worldly'.

Much to her dismay, Twilight is chosen to lead Equestria's first—and last—line of defense.


I figured I could put my ongoing misadventures in X-COM and turn them into a fic of some kind.
Wanna be involved in the war? Join The Initiative here!

Kinda toyed with this idea for a bit until I was completely comfortable with it. Hope you like it! Please leave any feedback in the comments!

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 217 )

WOW....That was epic. (Even if there was no real fighting)

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Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying what I've got so far!:twilightsmile:

So are we gonna see things like meld augmentation. Meaning Exo-Soldiers and Genetic Engineering? And I'm curious about what the interceptors will be like.

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Yeah, I'm planning on including a lot of the core mechanics and features of the game into the story:twilightsmile:

7891059 Awesome. I hope you will include Changelings as a race involved into the Initiative. (Please don't make them the EXARCH faction).

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Yeah, I'm a little stuck on where Changelings fit in the story :twilightsheepish:, but I'm gonna try and fit them somewhere. I don't see them really being antagonistic in nature, but we'll see where they end up.

Friction arises in the ranks, a mystery begins to unfold and one of the OC's makes their debut.

Things are getting interesting. :ajsmug:

I will be giving two(a third possibly pending) character sheets to you via pm. I wanna see this continue!!:pinkiehappy:

7900954 Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :twilightsmile:. I'm eager to see what you come up with!

And here I am, by the way what will the thin men be?

7909940 as apposed to short and 4 legged

I'm very curious about how you are going to handle the mutons, floaters, and chryssalids. There were chryssalids in Enemy Unknown/Within, right? Ooh, ooh! Chryssalids versus Chrysalis! I'm sorry, I just really think the chryssalids had a cool design.

Keep up the good work!

Damn! That was a tense chapter! To quote the mission clear screen from x-com,
Mission Status: Flawless

I do feel bad for the zebra that survived, the horrors she must be facing, not to mention those poor foals :fluttercry::fluttercry:

Keep up the good work!

Also, getting 3+ kills had better get Ethan promoted, because that was impressive shooting!

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Damn right! In game, I meant for Ethan to fill more of a support marksman role for the mission, but he just wrecked the enemy entirely. As of now, Ethan is arguably the best sniper I have in my roster. Expect to see him some more in the future!

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Sniper vs Sectoid: Will it live?
BANG
NO, IT WILL NOT!

Sniper vs Muton: Will it live?
BANG
NO, IT WILL NOT!

Sniper vs Chrysalid: Will it live?
BANG
NO, IT WILL NOT!

Sniper vs Sectopod: Will it live?
BANG
YES IT-
BANG
NO, IT WILL NOT! (Double Tap super OP)

Sniper vs Seeker: Will it- OH GOD! GET IT OFF! GET IT OFF! IT'S TRYING TO VIOLATE MY FACE!

So THAT'S what Rarity is doing to help the Harmony Initiative, I thought she would be in charge of designing armor for the troops.:raritystarry:
Then again, I do not think an entire army of earth ponies, pegasi, unicorns, griffons, zebra, and changelings would appreciate having to wear tailored, stylized armor that would be more fashionable than functional.:raritywink:

...The image created by that last line will give me smiles and laughs for days to come.:rainbowlaugh:

I like the inclusion of these interviews for OCs, allowing you to integrate them into the story a bit more.
Nice work.

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I was actually pretty freaked out when writing this because I thought I was going to mess something up :twilightblush:. I reread for inconsistencies practically a hundred times and I checked over all the information about the OCs I was going to introduce here soooooooooooo many times. Really had my fingers crossed here.

No complaints yet so, I guess it's alright :twilightsheepish:.

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I think you portrayed Vigil perfectly. I like the part you added of her wanting to become a guard as a filly too.

A large chunk of the group must have broken off. When Solemn looked back, there was only two ponies there, faces shifting from looks of horror to that of pure agony.

Slight nitpick though. I think it should be 'were' instead of 'was'.

Comment posted by Damien Martino deleted Feb 13th, 2017

Great story so far it would be nice if Ethan was friends with the zebra. Keep up the great work! Also are the thin men gonna be earth ponies because their Infiltrator's?

I like the addition of Flim and Flam, and there was just the right amount of wit in their conversation.

Also, question: who did they contract to build the interceptor suits? Pony Stark and Stark Industries, or Lex Canter and LexCorp? I'm inclined to believe it was the first one.:pinkiehappy:
Yes this is a Marvel VS DC question, and I in no way intend for this to be canon, unless the author wants it to be.:scootangel:

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Thanks! I do find it kinda hard to write Flim and Flam honestly. Hell, most of what I had in this chapter was a tad hard to write because I was a little too focused on chapter length more than anything else. Still, I felt comfortable with having this be a pre-frame to the next chapter.
Also, if it was canon, totally Stark heheh

I love what you did with Flim&Flam working as recruiters/inventors and making the interceptor mission a group effort as well. Especially with adding Vapor Trail and Lightning Dust as wingponies. :rainbowkiss:

I'm interested is seeing where this goes, though I have some idea of what's in store. :trollestia:

For two hours she writhed in unbearable agony hoping someone would hear her creams, shouts and whimpers. She knew her sounds would be drowned out until the cannons ceasefired and the griffons were either in shackles or routed from their stronghold. In that time, she had waited as patiently as anypony could with broken bones spanning the whole body.

screams*
ceased firing*
her*

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Goddammit, I thought I fixed those :facehoof:. Thanks for pointing them out.

At least that was her hopes. Her friends had already left the hospital no more than an hour ago to return to Canterlot or Cloudsdale. She didn’t pay attention to where they were going. Just the fact that they left. A part of her knew that they wouldn’t be able to stay forever, but she had desperately hoped one of them would come back and go against their duties. There was an incredible sense of loneliness that plagued her mind.

hope*

“You may have noticed the missing populace,” Flim continued. “How is it that the all these ponies are just going poof without a trace? Maybe there is a greater force that we never knew about? Who else to rise against and investigate these mysterious disappearances than something greater than the Royal Guard itself?”

“Commander,” Air Strike stiffened, causing a few of the maintenance ponies to jump back with the armor plates dropping. The returned to their duties urgently without a word, locking the lower hoof-guards into place before working on the upper hoof armor. “Sorry. I’d salute, but…”

They*

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I guess this is the last time I trust the GDoc importer :ajbemused:. Thanks again :twilightsmile:!

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Well when your OC gets to be the star of the chapter, you tend to read it several times over.:ajsmug:

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True that. I read chapter 2 about five times when it came out.

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Not gonna lie, I'm feeling the pressure now :twilightblush:!

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I read the interview chapter eight times. :raritywink: No joke.:twilightsheepish:

Before I read it, what is the Dark and Gore tag for?
And how bad does it get ?

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The Dark tag is mostly for the themes involved and I'd like to think that the gore isn't too bad initially. Basically, the extent of it is usually: Thing gets shot, there's blood, it dies. As with a lot of things, it tends to vary, but sections of extreme detail on the gore will be far and too few (chances are, it won't get to Cupcakes level of gory).

I hope you give the fic a chance and the tags don't turn you off :twilightsheepish:. If you make it past Chapter 1, I think you should be fine for the rest of the fic.

:yay:You're meeting all of my standards.:pinkiehappy:

One thing though:

“That went better than I thought it would,” Solemn sighed. Rime raised an eyebrow in response. “Was half expecting a huff her and a puff there.”

here*

BTW, is there going to be another interviews chapter?

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Yeah, I've got another one planned :twilightsmile:. I think what I want to do is have one before new characters are 'officially' introduced. I think it works better that way. I don't wanna end up just dropping characters in unannounced too much :twilightsheepish:.

“Howdy,” She said simply. The platform stopped and the two ponies stepped on. “Here fer yer ma?”

“Of course,” Solemn replied. The lift raised rather quickly, although now Solemn began to wonder why the mare had not just used the stairs instead. Applejack’s pace matched her own as the two stepped off the platform and followed the signs leading to the rear end of the engineering facility.

“I admire her y’know.” Applejack spoke as the two turned the corner and the machinery behind them faded, becoming echoes reverberating through the hall. “Good mare. Definitely knows how to keep th’ ponies workin’ better than I can. Gotta admit, ‘m always sad t’see her shift end.”

Solemn nodded. “I’d call it her special talent.”

Damn straight.

“Mom,” Solemn managed a smile. “Technically, you’re not even supposed to be here. They had a safe house ready for you in Canterlot. You would have had the same level of security we do down here.”

“But here I am,” She responded. Her lips curled into a smile. “Somepony has to look over you.”

“I’m glad you’re here.” Safe.

Silence overtook the two.

“I love you Solemn,” the violet mare said.

“Love you too mom.”

“Fireteam Valor to the armory! Fireteam Valor to the armory!”

Overnight Vigil stopped, her face turning grim. Her pupils shrunk to the size of pinpricks. “N-not anytime soon huh?”

Solemn Vigil stood and hugged her mother. The embrace was tight, almost squeezing and crushing Solemn’s ribs. “I’ll be safe, I promise.”

“Go and make me proud.”

:fluttercry:So much feels.:pinkiesad2:

“Cherry!” A tan stallion called, raising his hoof. “Glad I’m not the only earth pony around here anymore. Was starting to think the commander was punishing me.”

Aegis frowned. “Every squad has one. The loudmouth jackass I mean. You’ll get used to it.”

Joy...

A wave of heat and fire washed over Cherry and his ears rang like crazy. He rolled on his back and caught his breath, staring up at the darkening crimson sky. His own breathing seemed distant and alien. He closed his eyes and groaned, getting up and sitting on his rump, taking off his helmet and rubbing his head. The burning in his lungs was not nearly enough to annoy him. He wanted his damn hearing back.

A shadow crept before him. He hoped it was an angel coming to take him away from all of this.

“Are you okay?”

Nope. Just Solemn.

Well, nuts to you.

“I think I broke my nose,” Cherry answered, walking over while still holding a hoof up to his muzzle. Aegis knelt down, holding out bandages with his magic and remaining relatively calm. Rime stood on guard as she scanned the area for any more hostiles.

“Serves you right for jumping in without a second thought,” Rime said. Were it not for the helmet he wore, Cherry’s ears may have fallen flat. She turned, a jabbed a hoof at his chest. “Solemn could have died saving your reckless ass.”

“I thought it was just the two sectoids.” Cherry defended. “I could have killed them on my own if that thing didn’t just pop up. She didn’t have to come in! I could have taken that thing down on my own!”

I'll keep that in mind next time. It figures, you do something stupid and I'm the one that pays for it. Also, you don't need to worry about getting your ass kicked by the angry earth pony mare with the machine gun, Cherry. You need to worry about getting your ass kicked by the angry earth pony mare with the machine gun and my mother.

PS. Do not ship me with this jackass. I like girls anyways.

7998996 Please tell me there's going to be a scene where Cherry gets reamed by Twilight, Shining, Aegis, Rime, and/or Solemn's mom for his little stunt. :trollestia:

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