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I noticed this in the recently updated popular stories section and the only thing on my mind is, what the heck is that family tree? Assuming it's reading left to right like a family pedigree, Velvet and Nightlight gave birth to Cadence, Shining, then Twi. Then Cadence and Shining gave birth to Flurry... Now Shining and Twi gave birth to...
What the hell are you doing Celestia? And how's Shining and Twight's offspring not third generation on the tree, technically it should be right up there with Flurry.
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Well, no surprise that the Elements of Harmony didn't work. As Fluttershy and other people in the comments have pointed out, Celestia hasn't exactly done anything wrong, and besides that, Twilight hasn't really been too sympathetic in this story. I still don't want Celestia to win, but not really sure what the better alternative here is. The fight between Nova and Shining was a surprise though, especially how Shining ended up frozen in crystal. Now, war comes to Equestria. Though I have to wonder, since a war would lead to the deaths of many ponies and others: is this really worth it? Again, no matter who wins, I feel like Equestria overall loses.
Oh goody, and Nova is quoting lines from prince Joffrey. Well, hopefully Nova matures more that that brat, but it's not a good sign for him.
And Night Light's dead. I want to say I'm surprised, but truth be told I'm not. Given how he tends to be treated in your other stories, him dying unceremoniously, being told he was smaller than Shining and having Shining complain about sharing his wife is par for the course. Do you not like him or something? Because I can't think of a single story you wrote with him that doesn't have him humiliated or compared unfavorably to Shining Armor in some way. Honestly, in my opinion, I feel like continuing with these comments is just a cheap way to try and make Shining look better, which comes across as shilling to me, especially with his daughter hitting on him right after meeting him.
I'm sorry for all of these complaints. I've been following the story since it started and it was definitely very interesting at first. However, over time, I feel like something's changed, even though I can't put my finger on what: maybe it's me who's changed as a reader since the story has been going on for several years. I just feel that as the story goes on, everyone becomes worse; it's gotten to the point where I don't think I really care what happens to any of these characters. Which is a shame, because I did like them before. Again, this is all opinion and can be nit-picky, but I wanted to at least voice my concerns. I do hope that the last few chapters can help with this; I know you've managed to stick the landing before on stories. Thanks for listening/reading my ramble.
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No. That's not it.
I...
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I actually don't know how to respond to this. You have pointed out a real fault in my writing that I can't explain away. Honestly, I actually do not know why I keep writing Night Light as a fall guy. To be clear is it NOT because I don't like him. Hell, even in The Grand Part which I was going to offer as my counterargument where he's the main character, he's still getting cucked. And looking back at all of it now it's actually baffling just how badly I've done him. And now I genuinely feel really bad about it.
Truly, thank you for bringing this to my attention.
Especially just in time for Father's Day coming up.
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Yeah, I really do hope he comes to his senses. Right now he's very much acting like a brat who was given the codes to a nuclear missile which I'm willing to bet might be part of Celestia's plan. Right now she's using his pent-up hormones as well as his need for recognition to sway him to her side by giving him a sexual outlet and telling AND giving him everything he thinks he wants so he won't stop and be able to have a chance to think. He is Twilight and Shining's kid after all and I imagine he would be able to piece together the truth if he had time to himself to think which Celestia won't have.
She wants him close so she can prey on his weaknesses and insecurities and not give him a chance to piece together why his parents would be trying so desperately to keep him away from Canterlot. I really do hope he changes once the truth comes about but... I don't see that happening without some bloodshed.
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Other than the line between Shining and Twilight going down too far, it's exactly what it looks like. Including your identification of the culprit.
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Not just for this story, but Shakes as an author in general:
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the usual slow burn turned into something more fiery now, well everything is beginning to wrap up
personally the history of incest in the crystal empire feels kind of shoved in
Nightlight passing away is realistic here I suppose
Luna's actions here pretty much shoot my 'twlight's secret yet to be ally' theory in the foot, but her dialogue with him may start having him see he's in a gilded cage
thought about this before but what is Fluttershy going to do once she realizes Discord knew Twilight was alive but never told her?
Once more, I look forward to MOAR!!! heh heh
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You should tell him
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think some may be doing this one purpose at this point?
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At this point, I'm waiting for a marriage line from Shining to loop back up to Twilight Velvet.
Man this chapter was a rough one to get through.
1st R.I.P or Dear Stallion, Brother, Father & Grandfather Night Light, your death hurt me far more than both of your adoptive brothers combined.
Why did you hurt us like this Shakespearicles? Why kill Night Light, i feel so sad that the last time he ever saw Shiny & Twily, also last time they saw him was at that Zepplin. Man the hit my heart with a wrecking ball.
2nd. I LOVE! Your Star Wars lines, keep them going. I could hear the Emperor's them when she & Twilight squared off, got me shills.
3rd. Dame it Nova you made the same misstake as Anakin. Don't go down the same Dark path he did, save yourself. Fullfill your Cutie Mark's destiny. It say that you were to Slay Celesita not Lay her, bring true harmony to Equestria, not bring it to war.
I am looking forward to see where this is going. Man my heart is making me feel like i have a chest burster is in my chest right now.
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Well this is awkward...
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Celestia is nuts. Her people would gladly hand over the only male alicorn just avoid war. And it doesn't matter what anyone else wants she has created a huge mess with his selfishness and nova should have gotten the facts before running off.
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Yes... This is indeed awkward.
Princess Flurry Heart & Prince Nova Sparkle.
Infants https://derpibooru.org/images/2830146?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Toddlers https://derpibooru.org/images/2830156?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Children https://derpibooru.org/images/2830160?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Preteens https://derpibooru.org/images/2830168?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Late Stage Teens https://derpibooru.org/images/2830177?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Young Adults https://derpibooru.org/images/2830183?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Adults https://derpibooru.org/images/2830192?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Old Adults https://derpibooru.org/images/2830196?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Finals https://derpibooru.org/images/2830198?q=princess+flurry+heart%2C+oc%3Aprince+nova+sparkle
Spoiler Alert.
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Ironically I’ve raised pretty much the exact same question to TWSW™️ in regards to Shining Armor.
I will say I haven’t read all his stories, but in the ones I have, it hasn’t been uncommon for Shining to be tortured in some fashion as well. Granted, in some it’s written in a way where it’s warranted, but not so much in others. Including this story. Flashing back to Discord’s disappearing act that caused Shiny and Cady distress, and his mass ‘return to sender’ spell, both of which I still hope he receives consequences for.
I do of course acknowledge Night has gotten the short end as well, including in this story, while his son has gotten a lot more good in turn.
Damn, seems like Celestia’s only ally is a barely-adult potentially emotionally unstable kid. I don’t see how she wins this.
Twilight’s own iron-fist parenting has pushed her son away, and the destruction of a relationship like that is borderline irreparable. I don’t see how she wins this.
Cadance is prepared to wage a bloody civil war. Even if she wins the war, will the mental toll of the ponies the war killed weight so much that it crushes her. I don’t see how she wins this.
Luna has no allies other than a barely-adult kid she’s won by her side through an offering of sex alone, and could come crashing down once his libido settles. I don’t see how she wins this.
Shining is ‘dead’. He’s the only one I can see potentially winning this.
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I just hope that Nova & Flurry wins this in the end. They both semes to be horny little hormon balls, they should be a perfect fit for eachother.
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I guess we'll just have to wait and see...
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.... Also fair point.
And Luna makes her move, no surprise there. But at least her schemes gives the Sparkles a Plan D, since now there really is no need for Cadance or Twilight to go to war. Right now, if they wanna bring Celestia down...just tell her Nova's doinking Luna too. Luna's actions to keep her affair with Nova secret means she knows Celestia will go nuclear when she finds out (especially if she beats her to getting knocked up first), so all they'd need to do is sit back and watch the fireworks (and pull Nova out of the crossfire).
Of course I doubt anyone in the family is gonna be happy about what he did to Shining...
At this point, I find a happy ending very unlikely. Like on all sides. No matter who wins, everyone has already lost in some way. If Nova does turn on celestia after learning the truth, I doubt he’ll immediately forgive his parents; or even if he understands why they did what they did, the relationship will still be strained.
Even if he leaves, Celestia has still partially won (assuming she realy is pregnant and isn’t just counting her chickens before they hatch). Besides losing them in some manner, worst case scenario: they don’t come out alicorns, and I can only assume she’ll go right back to the family tree manipulation in that instance
But to the bad for her: she’s undoubtedly destroyed very important personal relationships of hers. Unless she’s really reached the point of seeing the ends as justifying the means, her conscience will eat away at her sooner or later.
And unless the war is avoided and it’s near start can be covered up, it won’t look good on her. She’ll have to provide a huge ass pull to explain it away to try and avoid bad public image and opposition, or say fuck it and go full dictator and use fear to keep people in line. I could go on (opposition, dictator offspring, rebel alliance between ponies and non ponies, war, etc…). Or she could do some brainwashing/memory wiping to erase her problems, refer back to conscience.
Twi and Shining, refer back to strained and destroyed relationships with son and Celestia respectively
Regarding the story in general, where’s Discord? He’s been MIA (for the readers) for a while now. I’m sure he’s been hanging out with Fluttershy and getting up to his ususal shenanigans, but I find it unlikely he’s done inserting himself (giggity) into this game with a super soaker filled with god knows what to spray in everyone’s (mainly Celestia’s) face, replacing pieces with random objects, and spiking the drinks with liquid chaos.
I was wondering when Luna was going to make her play.
But honestly I was too busy cackling my ass off. Pinkie and Dash were off the fucking wall in this one.
I'm currently on season 4 of re watching game of thrones. Love the reference there.
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we don't know what his mark means yet, Twilight and Shining may have named in Nova in hope he could end celestia maybe
and I for one wouldn't mind a short flashback to Nova getting his cutie mark
I understood that reference, but I'm guessing "Is you let him rebel me!" "This is your own masterpiece." was just a little bit too on the hoof?
Shining Armor finds himself the Emperor of incest after learning that fact about the Crystal ponies. Lmao!
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That's ture, yet i hope that my theory holds true aswell.
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Eyupe. In that case he would have been fucking his Mother, his Sisters Big & Little, then to end it up he would have been fucking his Daughter.
So many comments talk of winning and who can't or almost cant. All when Celestia has already won. She never cared about the little ponies in this. Her goal, her win, was the rebirth of the alicorn race. Now with Nova willing to do both her and Luna and likely Flurry with out much convincing since he was raised not even knowing her Clestia has reached her goal. She has won. This is also why it would be odd for Celestia to be upset Nova is doing Luna. She's going to want him mating with every available fertile alicorn. She wants her race back.
If she truly sticks to her guns that rebirth of her race is her only priority then the rest going on doesnt matter much to her. Even if she cant talk her way into deescalation and return to the status quo she steps down leaving Luna in charge and retires to a life of pregnant luxury. Unless Celestias goal suddenly becomes ruling is more important than continued alicorn creation she has won and there isnt much if anything anypony can do to change that given Nova is already working his way though the available alicorns.
One other thing. If I remember the big reasons Twilight and Shining exiled themselves was so they and their foal wouldnt be forced to breed with family members/ the princesses. So in a real way they succeeded too. Nova grew up and chose,wasnt forced, to sleep with the princesses and by the looks of things Shining should he not stay stone is going to of his own free will have sex with his daughter. The very two acts they were avoiding yes but now they choose them. Celestia wins that too right along with them. So really it's not everypony has lost. Its everypony has won but are still tied up in their old now resolved conflict.
How convenient for Celestia. No?
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You points are very valid & legit. But i think that you under estimate just how much almost 2 Decades of harsh & sour feelings tends to muk things up. Not to mention that Shiny & Twily never got to say a proper good bye to their father.
I like to think that once Flurry sees Nova, she will ask him to fuck her instead of Shiny doing it. Because just as Night Light was 2nd rate to Shiny, so will Shiny be 2nd rate to Nova.
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I fully agree about how badly the relationships have been sundered. I'm not saying anybody is going to forgive let alone forget. I'm just saying as far as winning/achieving their goals both sides really have. It's not everypony is on the cusp of losing is all I'm saying. Celestia losing her crown and abdicating to Luna stops any potential war cold. The fact that it was Nova that due to a misjudgment froze his father also helps keep demand for harsher punishments for Celestia in check. If her true goal is lots of alicorns then abdication and continued breeding of alicorns is the worst outcome she faces.
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Everything you said here is 100% corect in full. i have no disagrement with any of it.
in fact i hope that Celestia get's her goal of brining back the Alicorn race. I just hope that he win comes from either Beyond the Grave or from Within The Sun. Also hope Luna get's out of the way. Because i hope that the 2 young horney little hormon balls that are Flurry & Nova will replace the Sisters on the thrones. With them rueling & breeding happily ever after.
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I like your idea for an ending. :D I too hope we get to see Flurry and Nova go at it before all is said and done. Though I would fear for the surrounding buildings given Flurry's past. I doubt her lungs have gotten weaker growing up. Lol
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Then you and i are both proud members of Team NovaHeart.
As for the screaming, well. The 2 could allways change up Celestia's private pocket diamension garden & re-build into a pocket diamension bedroom. Hey they could even put their bed where the old Bonsai tree now stand. You know as a Symbolic thing.
YESSS THATS ALL I WANTED FROM THIS I CAN DIE HAPPY NOW!!
Oh my ,
is this going to be the next story in this amazing story line?
this chapter is awesome and sad at the same time.
so Luna gets drilled and filled and plunged i am betting this was not part of her sisters plan.
Am I the only one who thinks Nova will realize that he likely will need his mom's help? Perhaps after a little nudging from DIscord? Because after all while she likely hasn't been in the library for a while, no one likely knows that library more than her, cause you definitely know Celestia is going to have her hooves full with impending war.
So, now that we quickly approaching the end of this fic. I think that it is time for me to post my Top-5 wishlist for this comic's last stretch. This is just my wishlist. It holds no weight at all in the end, i just felt the need to make it.
5th Place. (Read In Darth Sidious Voice) i wish that the Royal Sisters is taken, care of.
4th Place, i wish that Shining is set free from his stone prisson, but as an Alicorn.
3rd Place, i wish that Night Light is getting brought back from death, (even if it is as an elderly stallion), kinda like Sombra did. By using all Alicorns their family has in their ranks.
2nd Place, i wish that Team NovaHeat triumphs over all in the end. (With a sex sceen with them written).
1st Place, i wish for a ending that leave the door open for a Sequel. Because man does i love this fic & man i don't want it to end so soon.
And from what Shining set up and with the choices of Nova, Luna & Celestia. There can be no peace for their actions.
Cadence WILL bring her army down to Canterlot so many pony live will be lost. Luna went behind Celestia's back and got knocked up first, So she's gonna be pissed.
When Twilight finds out what happened to her brother, if she doesn't go Twil-bananas I don't know what she'll do.
All I can say is that Canterlot is fucked and Equestria will never be the same when Celestia's crimes do come out into the open...
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And what is Plan D:
Simple, EVERYONE GETS THE "D".
Escalating more and more.
Luna is the mvp here, just let Celestia do her thing and get the same benefits xD
I wonder how long it will take for Nova to realize his own stupidity.
Shinings approach was far more effective.
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Could we apply the same logic to Plan-(E) also?
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Night light has been cremated, very much doubt he'll get brought back.
Much as I like the idea of shining becoming an alicorn, it wouldn't serve any purpose, unless things go by Invincible Viltrimite rules, and his seed can produce near-pure alicorns from ordinary mares (tho given how brutal the birthing process is, I doubt many mares would survive). But his son could fill that role just as well.
I'm hoping Nova brings all these mares to heel and becomes the "stallion who mounts the world". Lmao! I can practically feel that reference coming a mile away.
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You might be right there i fear. But it is established that the state of the body is irelvant in the ability for someone to be resurected, but the thing that is important is if the resurecte's soul is intact. See Sombra for an example, both in the show & in this fic. The thing is that i would love to see him Re-Unite with Shiny & Twily aswell, then meeting his grandson too.
The reason to turn Shining into an Alicorn aswell is so that his Sisters doesn't outlive him by more than some years in the long run. Maybe when they release him, the magical influx triggers somesort of magical overreaction in him, turning him into an Alicorn but making him Sterile. Wheil keeping his ability to do his sisters completly intact. So much stuff, but no seed.
Nova bringing all of these mares to heel wold be awesome. But for the Royal sisters i hope that heel comes with a 1000 year trip to the Sun & Moon. Or a permanent trip in the afterlife. As for his Mom & Aunt, they would allready have his Father. When it comes to everyone eles, he would in time gorw too big for them, killing them on etrence. So the only one that would be left for him to bring to heel in the bedchambers would be his Big Sister Flurry.
Typo
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Fixed!
Well, let us have ourselves an update on the & observe the new situation & the war maps & the different factions from orbit.
First we have Slutty Sun. Leader, Celestia. Allies, the royal gaurd, a very horney Nova Sparkle & all the ponies that don't know her darker side. (YET).
Then we have Moon Base. Leader, Luna. Allies, all of her bat ponies, a very horney Nova Sparkle & the forces of the Nightmare realm. (Unclear what will take place if & when Slutty Sun finds out about Nova's delivery of seed into Moon Base's mailbox. The leader of Slutty Sun might not be so happy to hear that the stallion she has cliamed for herself is being shared with another.)
After that we have The United Clan of Stars, Sheilds, Moons & Hearts. Leaders,
Night Light,Twilight Velvet, Cadance,Shining Armor,Twilight Sparkle & Flurry Heart. Allies, every single being, pony or non pony alike that their hearts have ever touched & The Rainbow Fire Squad. Status of Night Light, ash in an urn. (Resurection might be possible.) Still both he & Velvet are elderly & can not be relied upon unless an age spell is used on them first. (Known Mertis. (Cadance), being tained to be the ultimate babystiier by Celestia, defeater of the Canterlot Bug Invasion, Protector from King Sombra. (Shining Armorm (Curently a Stone Statue but can be set free), Defeater of the Canterlot Bug Invasion and killer of their Queen, Protector from King Sombra. (Twilight Sparkle), Defeating Nightmare Moon, Discord, Sombra, Tirek, Starlight Glimmer & the Everfree forest. (Flurry Heart), Shredder Sombra & Obliterated His soul to nothingness, AS A TODDLER.) The also have the Crystal Caslte & the Crystal Heart Itself + the Element of Magic, (Said Element does not function properly at the moment).Next up we have The Rainbow Fire Squad. Leaders, The Mane Seven Minus Twilight Saprkle. Allies, The wonderbolts, the entier Apple & Pie Famelies. The entier Animal Kingdrom, All of the Culture Elites that has taken Rarity to heart & Dragon Lord Ember & the entier Dragon Race. The United Clan of Stars, Sheilds, Moons & Hearts. & Cult Chaos (Note) Rainbow Dash, has her Sonic Rainboom. Pinkie Pie can break the 4th wall & maybe even the 5th. Spike is a Dragon that can grow from greed & rage & Fluttershy is a NINE HUNDRED TRILLION+ TERA TON (OF ANTIMATTER NOT TNT) LAND MINE! steping on her will release absoulte CHAOS of the drakest sort. & They have the Rest of the Elements, (Said Elements also does not function properly at the moment).
Spreaking of Chaos, next up we have Cult Chaos. Leader, Discord. Allies, Fluttershy, Smooze & Aboslute Chaos.
To end it of we have. Twinkle Twinkle Little Star Thinking With His Penis Are. Leader, Prince Nova Sparkle. Merits, breaking into Canterlot Castle. Allies (What side he curently want to deliver his seed to). (Greatest enemies. His Sister when she finds out what he did to their Dad. His Penis, Balls & Raging Hormones).
And that is how the setup for the different factions is looking on the war map, (so far).
It’s amazing watching Celestia’s plans burn