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You'd imagine that ponies are gonna start noticing that their regal, dignified Princess of the Sun has started acting like a rabid, unhinged diamond dog in public.
Or maybe it's just me.
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This whole business makes at least one thing perfectly clear:
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What a legend.
Well Mage Star did his best but bad luck now has Celestia on the war path
so sad to see Night Light's brother end his own life but Mage Star did the only thing he code to protect and keep the knowledge from fat but.
dang this is a grate chapter.
Well, her finding out was pretty much inevitable, but hopefully Mage's sacrifice will buy the rest of the Sparkles enough time to enact some sort of endgame.
When Celestia has finally had enough and goes berzerk
I stumbled on this not long ago and binged the whole thing, I was pondering a few comments along the way as people were acting like Celestia was evil incarnate; but I couldn't figure out why.
Apart from the obviously moral negatives of the initial generations of inbreeding and the creation of the Sparkle Family Telephone Pole, there was nothing to indicate that Celestia had done anything overtly immoral, such as murder, violence, blackmail, or anything excessively heinous. So far as I could tell she was a well intentioned albeit misguided extremeist, even if she did treat the two families as a millenia long science experiment she at least cared for her subjects after a fashion.
It's sad to see an actual confirmation of the dark path Celestia has decided to take.
RIP Magestar, the element of Loyalty should have chosen you.
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Right? I mean, all the way up to velvet and night light, she eventually told them her whole plan and asked for their help. And this final generation seems to have bred past the westermarck effect. So it just seems odd that they immediately jumped to "fake our deaths and go into hiding" rather than, y'know, talk to celestia. At this point, Twilight could have probably gone toe-to-toe with her if it all fell apart, or at least held her at bay long enough to nope out to the crystal empire.
God damn, Mage.
Also, fuck. She knows.
I half expected Celestia to tell them to keep something secret. Also safe.
I hope that Celestia keeps acting more and more unhinged so much so that Twilight’s old friends feel like something is seriously wrong and decide to blast her with the elements of harmony to help her but all it does is show everyone Celestia has fallen.
(Edited for missing words and spelling)
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Except none of them really had a choice whether or not they wanted to be part of the plan. Velvet and Night didn't actually find out about the plan until Cadance was being taken from them. Their marriage has been basically making the best of a bad situation. Yes they love each other, but they've never been 100% happy about their situation. And then they had to watch as their kids were set up into the same situation they were. All so Celestia can have a breeding stud to recreate a race all but long gone. Honestly it's probably only BECAUSE the latest gen is coming out alicorns that they even dare to make this move against Celestia, since they didn't feel like they could DO anything to say no. And going by Celestia's actions, their fears were right and she wouldn't let them say no.
So no, the current Sparkles are not in on the plan by choice, and that's why Celestia is the bad guy here.
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Vito Corleone was his name and his proper tittle/rank in the mafia was 'don' the 'godfather' was a term of endearment given to vito by his close friends and family members because of the way he behaved and how he treated those he cared for, every one of his closest friends was like a son or daughter to him and more often then not the affection was returned.
Are you telling me that Celestia confirmed that they had a baby… because of a god damn gender reveal, wow just wow.
Also was kinda expecting this, Velvet should have just let them stay hidden, now they’re in for a world of hurt. Really looking forward to how this is gunna end.
Can’t wait
I AM SO EXCITED TO READ THIS NEW CHAPTER THANK YOU THANK YOU
Shakespearicles is incredible!
I truly feel bad for Mage Star, but he knew that when Celestia had shown up before him he would have to sacrifice himself to keep the information secret. Unfortunately Murphy let Celestia stick her hoof into it with the balloon fragment and so now the race is on!
Will the Sparkles get to the Empire before she catches up to them?
Will they be able to talk or have to fight against her?
Stay tuned into the next chapters to find out!!!
What a hardcore way to go out: with extra salt.
Oof! Damn dude, I thought he'd just erase his memories himself, but... damn. And of course there was just enough evidence and information to make his sacrifice in vain.
Things are about to get... dicy!
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Congrats Moony! Your skill set makes you more qualified then sleepy uncle Joe for potus! Here's the gimp keys, a infuriated populace, border clusterfuck, and a worse pullout then last Tuesday at your mom's. Have fun
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im hoping thats the end game in this as the gender reveal was too risky to be anything but a bit of bait. also why wouldnt they flee to the empire and hide there in the areas sombra had hidden unless they had a plan. i can understand that the empire might be hard to get to but they had 11 months so they either have a plan or something stopped cadence and them from meeting up and getting them in there
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Civil war. Celestia is willing to go full fuck force in her Love Quest
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its more of a twisted love quest that started as a simple dream and then was twisted and broken on the way to its goal by her doing things that are unforgivable and her justifying them by saying that it will all be worth it. she defenetly wont stop untill she has what she wants or all the ponys she can use (everyone related to twilight and her family) are unable to be used or dead. if they wanted to make things more safe for them then it would have been better to have flurry vanish or something as then celestia would have been forced to draw her focus to rebuilding a "proper tree" to try again.
the author already has shown they are willing to put some interesting solutions on the table in this story (nightlight getting gelled) so it wouldnt be out of the question for... im not sure how to make this sound but make it so that they canot participate in either thing that they would have wanted from the end of their plan
what would happen if celestia was hit by the elements?
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The fact she went for this wretched fiasco at all hardly speaks well of her in this regard. She didn't become twisted. She was always this way. The mask is simply slipping
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Ejaculation
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na im saying her wish to have an alicorn stallion might have started out of a wish for love or mabey loosing it through old age. up to whatever made her go down the path where the "selfless" idea to re start the alicorn race came up im guessing she was just someone who rightly so wasent all that together
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interesting... i guess she would become a pegasis or earth pony. if the elements wanted to give her some karma for what she put others through mabey she would recive all the disabilitys from those she has caused to be born through her selective breeding program
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Well honestly, who isn't more qualified than the Cadaver-in-Chief? But no more talk of politics. That's a deep and steep rabbit hole that we're better off covering right back up before anything more comes of it.
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https://m.The only part of politics that matter.
Where's my M777 damn it?
When I go I hope it's as epic as spitting defiance with my own blood into the face of an immortal goddess who has come for me and mine.
Mage Star is now in Valhalla, where the brave live forever.
I'm kind of confused why the two Night Guards decided to break their cover. It doesn't really make sense to me, so the confrontation and resulting interrogation felt a bit forced.
What exactly was this "opportunity" they spoke of? If they were expecting to find Sparkle and Shining... well, congratulations, they've found an angry alicorn and an ex-captain, then what? Luna presumably never ordered them to do anything more than surveil and investigate (something they explicitly confirmed), and it's not like she was invested in Celestia's whole plan to begin with, so why in Tartarus were they so gung ho about it? They didn't seem like they had anything to gain by forcing their way into the apartment.
The two guards were certainly portrayed as being perfectly competent at surveillance and investigation prior to this, so it really made this feel like a textbook case of an Idiot Ball, a situation made even worse by the fact that it resulted in the deaths of three characters.
Rip Mage Star.
You grew on me in this short time.
That dude is now my favorite character in this story.
Its such a good story, I can't wait for more parts!!
What makes Mage star's sacrifice even more gut punchingly hard, is that he did it out of love for a brother and a nephew, a family, that he just learned wasn't related to him by blood. It's sad knowing that in this story of generations and legacy, Mage's memory and sacrifice can only live on in the Sparkle family history, if he'll be remembered at all.
Well I just stayed up to 1am catching up to this and gosh darn did it not disappoint.
Am I the only one who wants Celestia's plan to work out for her I mean she has been working on it for thousands of years and should she be deny her grand prize. Not saying she's in the right here it's just after reading all of this I feel like she should at least get a happy ending as well. I mean night light and velvet went along with the plan until they change their minds. I do honestly feel like Twilight could have just talked with Celestia about this whole situation and none of this would have happened.
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I guess we'll just have to see what happens.
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See things like this be messing with my anxiety I can't wait now for the ending. And now it makes me think you I have a twist ending. That picture makes it seem like Celestia had this as a contingency plan or something.
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Lmao😂
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Admit you just want to see her reamed by that alicorn dick
When sometimes you only have the chose of how you die...