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Welp, that's the lesson kids, Never understimate a +6 chekhov's sword!
Wonderfull chapter my friend. She got trapped in just the right place. Now to see what The Last Chapter will entail tomorrow.
My brain just goes to Final Eclipse !
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its good because since that pocket dimention isnt linked to equestria anymore time likely isnt gonna run the same either. So we might see a older beaten celestia next. Also shining is a statue atm so he will be fine to wait a bit
Dang it, all my people are dead!
My exact reaction to seeing the new chapter posted
Yo, Discord. Reality is your plaything. If Celestia didn’t kill you, we could use some help getting Shining out.
Boy I hope Celestia can’t do raw magic like Tempest and pulls a Buu screaming a portal out of the hyperbolic time chamber
Now he knows hopefully he will learn to listen more in the future. Twilight if he had been willing to listen probably would have told how she manipulate the family tree and why they were hiding in the first place. He didn't even bother finding out why they were hiding? He didn't wonder why if this was a matter of confronting Celestia then why would the heroes hide.
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And what is wrong with this exactly? Why they hide? All this massive clusterfuck is because some ponies so desperately wanted to go against Celestia.
In all this time all hardships really gone Celestia's way. All loses she suffered. All attacks was trown her way. Until she snapped, and even after that loses were one-sided. Would there be equal payback? For her infertility, infertility for every one who opposes her? For her severed horn, severed horns of every alicorn who opposed her? I doubt so. But it would be fair.
And if Flurry was so pissed for "killing her father", she should have trown sword at Nova, not Celestia.
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His mom was trying to keep him away from Celestia because she was willing to whatever she wanted to their family including having twilight dad date rape her . Celestia doesn't really care about others she just pretend to until they were no longer useful. If he had been willing to learn exactly why his family was scared of Celestia he wouldn't be in this mess. But he thought that he could easily play the hero and everything would work out. And being a teenager with 2 girls practically throwing themselves at you well stupidly comes into play even more.
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Nothing of this means that they can't talk or that they should hide or even be scared.
"until they were no longer useful" - this is where your mistake. Until they no longer loyal to her. Would you care for your own family if they betray you?
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After twilight parents stood up to her she didn't take it well and shining Armour and the rest of his family saying no to her didn't make her happy. She would have forgotten them once they weren't useful like when the kids were grown and forced together and giving her what she wanted.
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One thing to stand up to someone, entirely other thing - deliberately burn bridges in spite. No discussion, no negotiations, no compromise, nothing but spite.
"She would have forgotten" - again, this contradict story. Celestia cherished every family up to their death from old age. If they don't turn on her or themselves distanced from her of course.
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"Dear Princess Celestia, today I learned about the importance of honesty and open communication, and the dangers of keeping secrets."
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Umm, Shakes, i-i mean Twilight, i-i. ok why not both. I hate to break it to you both, but Celestia isn't going to be able to recive that friendship letter because, umm. She is not aound anywhere cloes to you atm, so it will fall on deaf ears. XD
Boy that was satisfying! Thought for sure Celestia was going to pit the half-siblings against each other. "Oh you think it was me who killed your father,? If you wish to meet the grand architect of his demise; simply look to your left."
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It was tempting. But we already got the "emperor pitting father against son" fight a couple chapters back.
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This fight resembles recalling of battle Luna vs Celestia from the past. With some differences.
In the past Luna didn't have everyone, family members and friends turned against her, just got less attention than Celestia.
In the past Luna didn't have monumental work being destroyed and didn't resieve any mockery for this.
In the past Luna didn't had army at her gates, demanding her death for crimes she didn't do.
In the past Luna actually striked Celestia before she regretfully used elements of harmony, non-letal force.
And despite all those differencess Celestia gave up much, much, MUCH further on road towards despair. Repelled army by hot weather and burnt some hair on colt that cheated on her. And in response for this she was attacked with lethal force and hatred from multiple parties, been crippled and banished. And how crippled? Better losing all legs than one horn.
I see here not satisfaction but one-sided zealous pummeling.
Nice cheeky artwork edit
...Well Tartarus has no FURY like an Alicorn mare barren and scorned! With her own plan destroyed by her own biology, Celestia went for Total Scorched Equis!!! Her defeat came at a high cost for all as will the fallout of the the Royal sister's secret of their eugenics program to repopulate the Alicorn race.
So the final chapter shall be interesting to read when it comes out...
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Acording to Shakes in his latest blog post. The Final Chapter will be up in about 18 - 20 Hours from the moment i sent you this Reply.
Well, that went a lot better than I thought it was. I was sure Nova was going to end up super dead by the end.
I'm excited and apprehensive. I'm going to miss this story.
And if we don't get to see some Shining/Flurry Twilight/Nova action before the end then I'm going to post a frowny face emoji.
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Don't forget Nova/Flurry action too.
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Yeah, that too.
so the elements have stopped or purged daybreaker from celestia then?
side bit, you ever worry you use too many pop culture references in your work?
Well let’s see if a 1000 year time out will help Celestia. I hope when Shiny gets out he will access as well.
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Wonder about Luna can she be trusted?
If she knows what good for her, she put her best hoof forward least she be sealed in stone after the foal is born.
So for her and the Foals Sake, she better had learned from Celestia's stupity.
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I had the opposite problem. I wrote a character with the idea of one of her traits is she just quotes memes... I haven't written her quoting one in 3 chapters now.
On the opposite side of that, I feel it's lazy writing to make references like that... but it's also hilarious.
aww poo i was hoping for stone, something Discord code play with for eternity.
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It can be done well and done poorly.
And I may be biased, but I believe the way I do it is done well on one, objective principle:
My references function in a cultural vacuum.
And by that I mean, if someone does not understand the reference, does it detract from the scene?
In my case, no. If you get it, then it adds to the scene. It makes a powerful scene more powerful if the reference evokes a powerful visual. It makes a funny scene funnier.
But if you don't get the reference, then it doesn't seem like a reference at all. It's just a benign sentence. It doesn't leave you scratching your head asking, "why did he write that?" And that's how referential humor *should* work, in writing.
On the other hand, if someone were to write a scene about a pony playing with Pogs™, or Dabbing, then it sort of dates the joke in a way that doesn't resonate with contemporary (or future) readers, and sends them off to google it instead of just enjoying being immersed in the story.
Flurry introducing herself to Celestia as she did fits the scene.
Flurry introducing Spike's arrival fits the scene.
If you get the references, so much the better.
But you don't have to get it for the scene to work in a cultural vacuum.
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I totaly agree with everything that was stated here. + I adore these ref easter egg hunts in stories.
It was around this time yesterday, so any minute now could an almost 5 year walk come to an end.
Waiting on the next chapter got me like:
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Same here, same here.
Tia, should have petrified your eggs… oops
> The artillery commanded
commander
> The ponies outside faired no better
fared
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fixed! ty
And that is what you call going Psycho kablooie. Well done.
I don't know why, but I really liked the line about rounding up the fog. It's a neat bit of world-building that makes logical sense in the canon world, but the show's writers would have never gotten the chance to include it.
This whole chapter was excellently fast-paced and exciting. I particularly enjoyed Celestia's evolution from sympathetic victim to a monster.
Classic
I did not expected this... Love it to still have hope...
Way to rob Newt’s lines from Aliens.