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Total Eclipse


Just a dude that likes dem ponies.

Comments ( 23 )

Digimon, seriously?:facehoof:

(before read) this looks interesting and promising.
(after read) i was horribly mistaken....excuse me while i bleach my eyes and have a lobotomist remove the part of my brain that has the memory of reading this....

861496 (before read) It must be MLP-related!
(after read) *pukes* SERIOUSLY? I SEE NO WAY THAT IT IS RELATED TO THE MLP UNIVERSE!

Da fuq? I second that VGFanatic20.

861574 Ground Control to Major Tom, roger that.

861585 Wow, you know about the song "Space Oddity" by David Bowie.

Well, that's a first.

861662 i listened to that song all the time in the car when i was little. sang along to it too. still do that on occassions. but i can't believe i'm the first to make that reference to ya, i figured you get that several times a day. but wow, that song is awesome, i can't believe no-one else referenced it.

And here i was thinking that the mature flag would let people know what to expect.

This was very well written. I like your writing style. Digimon? I'd like to see how this plays out. I'll add this. :twilightsmile:

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That you.

Your guess is correct. That is indeed what the crossover is.

Seeing as this story was adlibbed on the whim of an evil muse, I wonder how it will play out as well.

Digimon:rainbowhuh: this could be interesting. Digimon Tamers crossover is evident....:pinkiehappy:

tracking.....complete

I'm going to ask nicely. MOAR :twilightangry2:

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Id love to give more, but I've hit a bit of a snag.

i have a million story ideas in my mind and I need an editor...there wouldve been two more chapters by now if it wasn't for that.

Editor. I could do that.

Also, there's an easy way that I sort my ideas and filter out ones that are seemingly meaningless.

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:pinkiehappy: Wow, that would be nice of you. Shoot me a PM and I'll give you the google Doc's links. After that my brain will kick in and I'll remember how to share it.

What is your method for sorting out ideas :trixieshiftright:

1015169 I'm not sure what a PM is. Private message? xD Well, my e-mail address is avirextin@Gmail.com

My method for sorting out the madness in my head when ideas come out like flurries in a snowstorm. I sew up a jacket. However, I like the feeling of snow on my skin, and I don't want to look goofy in an overly done jacket, so my method is simple and pretty myriad, but effective:

I plot out how I'd like the story to go by quickly jotting down key points of the story in chronological order. I'm an artist, and before I draw a picture, I must sketch what is called a 'skeleton sketch' or 'guidelines.' These key points written in a sequential manner without holding any excessive detail is a good way to clean out an overwhelmed mind

ex:

Pinkie crosses the bridge

Rarity sees pinkie

"What are you doing there?"- Rarity

"Crossing the bridge- Pinkie

Bridge collapses

Pinkie fights for her life in the stream

Roseluck and Darkbladex96 appears

ending

Note how I used the word 'ending.' This lets me free style what I want to do for an ending. Like a skeleton sketch, don't over rely on it, feel free to make changes

Ex:

Bridge collapses ====> bridge explodes


Story:

Pinkie had just started a wonderful job as an editor. It was in a town she's never been to before. During her travel to the unknown city, she happened upon a bridge. It was a decrepit, feeble looking thing that spanned over a raging river. The wooden planks that make up the river indicate that it's been weathered and the bridge was probably ancient.

Pinkie, ignoring imminent danger, trotted happily across the deathtrap.

"Pinkie!" The party pony turned around quick-fast to see Rarity, a good friend of hers. "Get off of that...thing! It could collapse at any moment!"
Pinkie, sensing the desperation in the chic mare's tone, began to turn back.
"I was just crossing the bridge-"

Suddenly, the damned thing exploded. Wooden splinters flew through the air like shrapnel, lodging themselves into stones, trees, and flesh. Pinkie plummeted into the river and was instantly snatched from the air in it's rage. Pinkie struggled to keep afloat, but to no avail.

*Note, I didn't take forever writing this, I had dinner and was playing SSBM with my brother. Sorry for the long response. It's like, 2:09am. I hope you're nocturnal. I know I am.*

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Ehh, nevermind my advise.
I'm no writer apparently. Not a good one, at least. Forgive me if I sound like a wimp, but I put out what I thought could be a pretty decent sequel to a pretty bad story, in hopes that my new, more redefined writing style could spark interest in readers looking for a good laugh with a bit of thrill on the side.

Forget it. I can be an editor, I've got the education for that. :twilightsmile:
And you know what, my method for sorting out ideas is simple to use and effective, so try it out. :raritywink:

I thought I published this...
Silly me.
Bare with me people, there are like 4 perspectives right now, but it will be cut down to two. There are so many right now mainly because you need to know where the key players are .

this is good, i like it.
880192
you have a good sense of writing and gore. i applaud thee

1487298
this is an amazing story. you should continue this

1487298 When will the human from the proluge come back? also where can I find information to better understand what is happening.

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As for the human: I'm not working on the story at the moment. But he would have been revealed in a few chapters.

And for what you don't understand; simply tell me and I will give you links info. I didn't just use one digimon series, I took elements from quiet a few.

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