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InTheSun
The NSFW stuff of someone who is far too careful.
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You're doing pretty good, keep writing!
Hmm, not bad, was this your first attempt at clop?
I've never written any myself but this isn't bad at all! I do love TwiPie, they're an adorable pairing.
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Thanks! Yeah, this is my first try at clop (probably not my last, though). TwiPie is my personal OTP, so I had to start with them.
Nice story, though I will never understand why Twilight always seems to cast the gender mods on her friends and not herself, it confounds me, dood.
FIRST TRY?
FIRST?
My word you're a natural darling.
You've done regular stories of course though.... Right?
Never the less this is wonderfully well done.
That's not bad at all!
“Hualagwalag" is the name of my new ska band
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So, the idea for this story came when I read that male horses in real life will actually masturbate by jumping up and down to slap their penis against their stomach. I immediately thought that sounded like something Pinkie would do, and the story sort of spun out of that. I might write a Futa Twi story some day, but probably not anytime soon.
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Thanks a lot! That means a lot to me. This is indeed my first time writing sex, though I have written a few SFW fanfics before.
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I'd download their album illegally, listen to it twice.
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No, no, you're close, but no. IIRC, male horses just use the muscles down there to slap their penis against their stomach, not jump up and down.
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Oh well. This story ended up being a strange balance between getting things factually accurate and not seeing pictures of bestiality. I tended to err on the side of fewer horse dicks.
You could do a funny sequel revealing that the magical temporary penis was fully functional and Twilight is now pregnant.
Oh, this was a really lovely story--just a great combination of sexy and sweet, funny and serious. Twi and Pinkie were wonderfully in character and felt very much like a long-established couple, especially when Twilight told Pinkie that Pinkie would have to do all the work. That just struck me as the kind of straightforward remark that you'd make to your partner of several years versus someone who was newly your lover.
My favorite part, though, was this: “That’s okay,” she said. “I know you’re tired. I just wanted to make you happy.” That's so Pinkie, and it was a real "awww" moment.
Hope to read more from you soon!
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Hey, thanks. That's pretty much exactly what I was going for. I think that far too many stories (both clop and non-clop) cover the initial pangs of love, never going further, into the deeper, truer love (in my own opinion) of a couple that's been together a significant amount of time. Glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on another story now that will be very different story-wise from this.
Love it, very nice^^
this was really good i love twinkie its best pony couple
This makes me imagine a pink unicorn with a group of balloons as her cutie mark, just like her "daddy"
Awesome read. It was even romantic, at least to my perception. And I don't see that often in clop.
Very nice. Sweet and well-written. Then the clop was sweet in the same way
and the normal way
9/10
definitely really good I don't see any problems in this fic very well done. I found it odd at the end when they spoon sexed I will definetly have to discuss that with my wife :)