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Furor


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No clop:fluttercry: its ok, it was cute and adorable:pinkiehappy: i love a good raripie

This is pretty cute. Anything with Pinkie is cute. I love the last few paragraphs quite a bit. Pinkie's descriptions of her feelings are adorable.

You've got an "arms" in there.

Wait what? The thing that was described as a vibrator actually was a vibrator!? Honestly stunned by this.
Really adorable and I loved it.

Yes! :pinkiehappy:

I'm glad you finally posted this here, Furor; it deserves the exposure! :heart:

Always liked this one, very cute.

Think it's the only RariPie I've ever actually read.

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RariPie is underappreciated.

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Thank you. Pinkie really makes it hard to have any other pony as your favorite.
And I like 'arms' better than 'forelegs.'

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Thank you!

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Huh? Oh, you're ... Huh?
Heh, thank you. I took your criticism, touched this thing up and changed some awkwardness. I forgot how much fun i had with this story.

Dear Author

Y U NO PUT IN CLOP!?

-Your sexually frustrated readers

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Because I'd published this on deviantart last November and dA doesn't allow clop.

... And no, I won't write a version with clop.

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Heh, yeah; guilty. :pinkiesmile: The site's system didn't like the thought of a username made of three letters and one curvy piece of punctuation, so I chose a name designed to reflect how nitpicky I can get. I figure it's fair warning. :trollestia:

The changes turned out well; I daresay it flows as naturally as a Sleepless story now! :pinkiehappy:

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Hush now; quiet now. Sometimes an unfrosted cupcake is refreshing! :eeyup:

Aww, very sweet. I couldn't stop smiling while reading Pinkie's dialogue, so that definitely screams "success" to me!
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

Good gravy, Pinkie is just too adorable. Cute story :twilightsmile:

FROSTING!!!!!!
I was in my kitchen eating an apple when I read the no clop for you thing and pinkies scream and for some reason I hit the floor laughing my head off my sister just looked at me like I'm crazy.:moustache: you get a moustache

Feels a bit lacking having a clop-scene with no clop, but very good nonetheless:pinkiehappy::raritystarry: Under-appreciated pairings FTWdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png

I think leaving out clop was a good choice. And that was the absolute sweetest way for Pinkie to describe her feelings. Omg. :yay:

I've been wondering how this pairing would play out ever since I noticed these two spending the entirety of Putting Your Hoof Down together.

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Thank you! At the time I wrote this, the Smile song had just been leaked on Youtube and I took a little inspiration from that. RariPie was even less popular back then, and I found it a little random that they put those two together in PYHD, but I can't complain. They're just too adorable together.
fim.413chan.net/fic/src/133931753007-tumblr_m0n0lrBNlV1r7.gif

If you left out the clop, shouldn't there be a "teen" tag instead?

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That's what I set it as when I submitted it. The Mod who approved it seemed to disagree and apparently changed it to Mature.

Found this, thought of Smile:

tinyurl.com/PPRSmile

This fic deserves more views. :pinkiesmile:

EDIT: In case it won't post right, it's here.

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Hehe. *saved*

Thank you for thinking of my story? It must have left quite the impression.

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It must have left quite the impression.

Heh, I take it you've never been to my author page. I've got a feature gallery for shipfics and one for non-ships. Smile is in the ship one, right alongside Like Fine Wine and Seeking Beauty. :pinkiehappy:

I might gush about a fic, but when I do it's because I really like it, not just to make the author feel good. You've got a fine little fic here, and I make it a point to recommend it--especially to those few souls seeking RariPie. :twilightsmile:

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Hm, I must have missed it. Seems I also missed that Watch button, because I've been greatly enjoying your Ponystar Celestia. But I didn't hear about your future tense story. I will have to have been reading that later then.

it was the bestiest fanfic ever and come on make a part two of dawn of a new day it was really good and i think :twilightblush: you should like really lets see some cloping in it too k

also make version with clopping in it k or stuff

Adorable, meaningful, and beautifully written. I love it. I'd really like to give suggestions on how to make this even better, but after reviewing it, I can honestly say that I don't know. This is easily one of my favourite fics of all time, and I'd recommend it to anypony who's not afraid of a little moderately suggestive writing.

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Thank you very much, man. I also have to admit that this is probably still my favorite thing I've written, and such a random idea, too. But glad you enjoyed it.

as soon as i saw (nope no clop for you)

I just lost my shit

omg

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