A new member of the HLF is captured after a failed mission and a ruthless PER pony decides what to do with him.
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The story is wonderful and short. Theeach side show what they are fighting for
Good story. I fell bad for him. He was still so young but unfortunatly so it is in war
People still be using the PER and making stories, no shit
7898745 lol
two questions
How is Starswirl at all involved with this story?
If it's in a later chapter, why is this story marked complete?
Last paragraphs: Unexpected gory hypocrisy. That part was somewhat interesting, still this story in general felt like, I dunno, substanceless. The conflict is closed too soon, unless it is an introduction.
On the other hand, if you wanted to expose the mindset of the factions, eh, it kind of works but it it is not very story-ish. It does not explore deeper on the characters or circumstances, either.