i wrote the fanfic friendship and violence. =3 what can i say i love TF2 as much as i love to see fluttershy doing her yay.
after an accidental launch of a ponymade rocket. the mane 6 find themselves on board and heading towards a strange place. landing in teufort, they meet the red team. after a bumpy meeting they friend up and try to get a new rocket fixed to get back to Equestria.
the story takes place in between season 1 and 2 of mlp
as for TF2 it takes place shortly before the pyromania update but after the earlier comics and meet the's
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Phew, I'm relieved. I have a TF2 Crossover started (first chapter finished) and I thought that this took the thunder but never mind, I'm good. Sorry man, but there's one problem with your story. Not disliking this but I'm trying to help you. Fix the spelling and such. You have a good amount of mistakes already in the description and the chaper names, ch1 and ch2, should be Ch. 1 and Ch. 2. It looks more organized and more appealing to the human eye. Anyways, good luck on the TF2 fic.
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i know. i usually have someone helping me fix up the writing but they usually stop talking and rarly respond again. (either caused by school,work,vacation)
it recently happened again. luckely i got sevral chapters finished already but that only helps so far.
is it something i did?
edit: also i can't use word to correct anymore cus i got a new pc and it doesn't have the autocorrect.
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I'm not saying the story is bad, just get a new editor if your current one is out of reach. I know that having an editor helps greatly. I have one myself and I rarely publish any chapters with errors anymore.
The grammar is atrocious, incredibly so. You misspelled "two" for ponies sake! Please get an editor, please, please, PLEASE! You have no idea how much it will help you gain views.
I shall reserve my usual HOORAH! when a good story is released and i shall instead place a HUDDAH! in its place
MARVELOUS Story here! Looking forwards to it!
I spy Hat fetish 2
Engies gonna steal Apples Stetson! Dont Do It! She will buck you preeety hard!
Story:hmm... Nice indeed
I agree with them, get a proofreader
Grammar:
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i posted a blog about this.
i know people like how the story progresses and i'm happy for that.
but i've gone trough 4 editors each of witch stopped for their own reasons.
chapter 1 was redone by the last editor who i havn't heard from for almost a month.
and considering the reactions i get the impression none of my editoors were doing a good job.
It's a nice story but Spy and Medic just seem out of place without their accents.
HEY
! you took my advise and put your story on FimFiction.
Good job, honenestly i dont care about spelling. So i cant critize there. Anyways good job.
steal the hat....steal the hat!.......STEAL THE HAT! lol or make one of them eat heavys sandvich by acsident or touch sasha :D
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they'll have accents at small moments. it's just difficult to constantly keep up an accent when you got 9 different kinds (8 if you don't count mumbling)
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and the responses seem to come faster here. tought the first ones seem to be more like judgements. but hey i was expecting worse to be honest. extra attention also extra negative atention. i'll add the rest over time. gives me time to find a new editor.
yes i did
i still don't know what went wrong with my last editor tough.
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always fun having people who don't look at spelling so obsessively. personally i think it would be a bigger problem if you did'nt catch any of the story.
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just not the one i've uploaded so far
some of those have been done in the already written chapters
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Personally I like the mystery of Pyro, hope it never changes even though i'm 100% sure that the Pyro is secretly Pinkie Pie.
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Oh! Oh! Are you going to pair some of the Red with the Mane Six? That's what most of the other tf2 crossover here did anyways. Just curious if you're going to either do odd pairings or do somthing that hasn't been done yet
ponies in space
854995 If that happens here's my pairing:
Medic x Fluttershy
Spy x Rarity
Scout x Rainbow Dash
Engineer x AJ
Pyro x Pinkie Pie
Sniper x Twilight
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Yeah, those are the most common ones, in another story that's still in progress, it's Demoman x Applejack, Pinkie x Scout, Soldier x Derpy, Heavy x Fluttershy, Medic x Twilight Sparkle, Sniper x Rainbow Dash, Engineer x Rarity, and that's it for known combos in that story atleast.
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if those are the basic team-ups then i guess i did stuff a little different. but only with one team up
medic and fluttershy was a no brainer but heavy fits in there too doesn't he so she got both
spy and rarity still there
scout and rainbow dash yup
engy and AJ of course.
sniper and twilight still there
pinkie pie got a completly different set tough
i teamed her up with soldier and demoman
pyro i keep as an emergency wild card but she'll (yeah in my opinion pyro must be a woman. what kind? crazy but other than that idk.) get a special little trick people might like
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I always think of Pyro as some Tomboy who likes to set things on fire.
This is the best TF2 crossover! Also: Would of liked it better if Pyro and Pinkie were paired but eh I'll live. But I can literally see the hilarity come from this story... yes...
854976 Your story is very good and easy to follow. Considering english isn't your 1st language.. I say GOOD JOB SIR
Pans guess what I just found an awsome story
Hmm, it gets better
Good job, keep it up
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I agree! The perfect story for anyone who likes Team Fortress 2 and My little pony.
YAAAY MORE!
so far...i don't like this to much only cause of rainbow...but hey...that's just me
I really like this TF2 crossover! I've read a few but none where the ponies go to them!
SSSSSSSSSSSPPPPPPPPPPPPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
876447 agreed
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what exactly don't you like about rainbow dash? if it is because she abandoned fluttershy, she actually didn't. in fact she didn't knew fluttershy followed her.
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thanks for the support =3
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i read some too. one where the ponies replaced the team, i noticed a recent one that involves robots.
i try to keep this as much in canon with whatever storyline both have.
882266 no..not because of that...i just don't like rainbow
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oh like that. well let me tell you. personally i'd rather have done this without rarity. she's low on my list of favorite characters.
but she still is part of the main crew and it would be wrong to not include her.
rainbow isn't my top favorite either but you can guess who is.
i never said she shouldn't be in it...i just said i don't like her
So Fucking good. You are amazing.
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i'm looking for this "mistake" you point out and then it hit me.
are you talking about teufort? that's the canon naming of 2_fort in the TF2 comics. it's not a spelling mistake.
just putting that out there
Uh oh! Here's the administrator! Run for your lives! It'll be funny to see what she'll do. Also: Blue fez sent to Equestria!
I feel that I should point out a mistake in the Demoman's country of origin. He's scottish not irish. That's almost as bad as calling an australian a new zealander.
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. found loads of issues with TF2 and mlp continuety (or however u spell that)
probably mistake of the editor of that time
during one of the earlier chapters she was unaware of the pyro being able to knock sappers off sentries with the homewrecker.
i'll fix that
Things will go down! Administrator vs. RED and ponies!
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Remote-Detonated rockets? COME ON VALVE!
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i know! why isn't it in there yet?
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she won't do anything. she can get people to do it for her. if all else fails, she knows a guy.
nice pic btw
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feels like somethings missing....better said someone
Just wait, they'll make friends with BLU also and The Administartor will be powerless to stop the onslaught of love and tolerance (and possibly lead).
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blue are just clones taking the administrators command. the reds however (at least the ones we follow) are the ones we've seen in the meet the videos. thus the original hired merc's. and the administrator? well the ponies arrival is not a bad thing. not even for her. she doesn't need to love them just tolerate their existance.
by any chance...are you going to include SAXXXXXXXXXXXXXTOOOOOOON HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALLLLLLLLE!!!
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as mush as the administrator might hate dealing with him. he might be one of her last chances.
998500 well...you include him...and the mane 6 are screwed...please...continue
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if they were alone they would be screwed. but they aren't and hey. i guess they learn a thing or 2 from these guys.
1000981 well...maybe...