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JapaneseTeeth


A guy with too much time on his hands. Enjoys writing and over-analyzing things.

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Pinkie longs to meet Mosh Whiplash, the only pony who parties harder than she does. Unfortunately, he prefers ponies of the plumper persuasion, and unless she can overcome her own metabolism, she won't even get to see him again. Can she put on the necessary weight before he leaves town?

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Yeah, this is one of my weirder stories. I did on request from a forum buddy of mine, and figured I'd use the opportunity to experiment with the style and with writing a type of story I don't usually do. It could probably stand to go through a couple more revisions, but I don't think it's too bad in it's current form.

There's nothing blatantly sexual in here, but the whole "getting fat to impress somepony" thing is bound to weird some people out, so I'm bumping the rating up to teen just to be on the safe side.

Also, the song Mosh is singing is Andrew WK's "Party Hard". Given that Andrew WK is basically Pinkie Pie in human form (seriously, look at his twitter) it seemed fitting.

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Comments ( 26 )

I could totally see this as an episode! Well done!

This gonna be good

Typical love.

I don't know if it's what you intended, but when I picture Mosh, I think of Andrew WK as a pony.

This is hilarious...

You desvere to be featured.:pinkiehappy:

This is one non-stop exercise in hiliarity.

Easily some o the most insane Pinkie Pie fics I've ever read.

By the way, great job writing a fic of this calibur without having to resort to anything intentionally fetishistic. This came out naturally and silly, the kind of fic that is simply, totally Pinkie Pie. Hooves up. /)*(\

Oh, and by the way, is "partying hard" really just codeword for "we had sex"? I kinda find it hard to imagine somepony with a plump-girl fetish would not try anything fresh.

This fic... Just this fic man:rainbowlaugh: :yay:

Very good! Made me laugh many times, especially Twilight's adorkable assistance with the eating order. Well done to you, good sir, well done indeed! Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

I'm the forum buddy who asked for this, and I am very happy with the end result! :rainbowlaugh:

@Dr. Horse: Yup, that was pretty much the idea. Hence why he's singing an Andrew WK song at the concert. :derpytongue2:

@Brony_fife: Thanks. :pinkiesmile: I left that particular element ambiguous. I actually find the idea of Mosh having platonic party groupies hilarious, but I figured I'd leave it open for people to fill in the blanks for themselves.

@Justanotherbrony: :yay:

This...Is... BRILLIANT! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
TAKE ALL MY BITS :rainbowlaugh:
*ahem* Anyway
This is probably the best pinkie fic i have ever read :yay:
This HAS to be in a episode :rainbowlaugh:

This is almost too funny!

Awesome.

Head shaking in disbelief. If the doctor from the book episode met her mid-story... ai yai yai. Don't know the song you mentioned, my mental jukebox kicked up "Whole Lotta Rosie" by ACDC.

There are people who would kill for Pinkie's metabolism!

This story is quite a good read, aswome job. I hope you make more like this turns up later on. Just saying.

and so pinky pie became the inspiration for the song "big bottomed mares make the world ge 'round"

this was hilarious and i could see it being an episode that tells children that its ok to be fat because rockstars love fat chicksdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png

Not a bad story, but too cartoonish for my tastes.

Okay, this is seriously one of the funniest things I have ever read. I was laughing all throughout this fic. You captured Pinkie Pie's personality perfectly. Great job.:rainbowlaugh::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::raritywink::raritystarry::rainbowwild:

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