Fluttershy accidentally leaves a snake in her friends house.
How will Twilight handle this situation?
Dive right in and find out.
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"Not a word Spike!"
I smell blackmail material muhahaha. Cute story
2532053 Thanks for the nice comment. :D
2532173
You're welcome. Was just a good story and I look forward to more.
Well Twilight, you scared Fluttershy to death, so karma dictates vengeance. I kind of got that she had wet the bed by her throwing it in the wash, but someone else might not have got that I guess. Lovely story...
2535523 Thanks, nice comments are the best comments :D
Ha!
2549013
I dunno if that was a:
A: A, HA implying that it was so bad that you simple had to laugh at it.
Or
B: A, HA implying that you enjoyed the story.
Help a fellow man out here :P
2550962 B.
2552238 Yay.
hahaha
Poor Twilight, fun story.
I don't know if anyone else is seeing this, but it looks like some of the lines are broken, and the last few words of the line are floating off in paragraphs of their own. It's kind of strange, to be honest.
Personally, I'd also have a chat with your editor, as I noticed a couple of errors throughout.
For example:
Is awkward, because people generally expect a comma between Library and Twilight, and you have the present tense "manage" instead of the past tense "managed", which in a story told in past tense causes awkwardness.
With that said, it's a good story; It'd just be even better with some cleanup.
3097439 Thanks for your input, I'll have chat with him.
In the next episode of "Mare VS Wild" Twilight will have a face off with a 50 foot python. It's hunt or be hunted.
Karmic justice have been served.