Just another guy passing the time creating stories and artwork. Im into headcanon and backstories of characters. and i cant wait to see what season 6 has in store for our favorite ponies. Live long :D
Twilight wakes up one day to discover that everypony in her life has up and disappeared. The only clues she finds are carved into the side of her Crystal Castle, And even then she's unsure of where it will lead her. Will she find her friends, or be alone again?
Will Trixie and Starlight come back in time themselves to help her, or will they too vanish?
And to think all this began after reading a simple Note.
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A little quick in how it all happens and (just my personal preference) the paragraphs are really not too large but it makes it a little harder for me to read. Now you don't have to change that cause that's just my personal preference.
But again, it's a little fast, good idea, but it feels like there's hardly any build up or suspense. Though of course this is just my opinion so you can completely ignore it. I'm not saying it's bad, just fast. That's about all that I think is really wrong here. Your spelling and grammar seem to be pretty good
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In the off chance you get this. Im in the middle of updating it.