Trixie invites Starlight Glimmer over for dinner, she hypnotizes her and does a magic trick on her.
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I don't get it...
"Let me hypnotize you for a magic trick."
"OK."
She hypnotizes her for the magic trick.
End.
7870948 Pretty much.
I'm not sure I've ever seen such stilted dialogue before...
That fic is so boring to read that I couldn't keep my concentration for more than few lines.
:blinks:
:claps once:
:can't bring herself to clap another time:
7870948 Yup. This is basically the last fic Yoshi wrote that 'involves' hypnosis with a marginally better induction and, unfortunately, more dialogue bereft of any characterization, though perhaps worse for the attempt to make us sympathetic for their histories with their moms.
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His/her last fic with hypnosis is almost identical in that regard.
7868664 I'm not entirely sure, but I infer that CAPTAIN created his/her first Fanfiction and she's testing the waters, the fanfic itself however is decent and somewhat ironic. One would expect Trixie would've taken advantage of her but she didn't. Starlight put her faith in her even though she knew things could go awry, and yet, Trixie fulfilled her promise. That is a far cry from most Hypnosis Fanfiction.
The problem here is that it's a little bit short, thus us fast readers and the ones that are use to massive amounts of text.
Well that was anticlimactic.