7925100 I may continue this story later with some elements of an expanded alternate universe where Nightmare forces everypony to wear diapers, but that would take a lot of work and distract from the other projects I want to do, so I don't know when, or if, that would be made.
Though, if any writers out there want to use this AU that I've created, they're more than welcome to as well.
Things are starting to pick up here. Personally, I'm looking forward to Celestia getting the same treatment (if that's what you have planned), although I'm also holding out hope for a Diaper Dictatorship of sorts (or at least the main six getting the treatment as well). That said, speaking on a personal preference level, I hope Nightmare mellows out a bit; I know domination and punishment are central themes here, but I've always enjoyed the idea of a character being forced into diapers and begrudgingly enjoying it. Nightmare's treatment, though, forms a barrier to a character (logically) forming that desire.
Anyways, I do have to comment on the grammar. Perhaps I have a more critical eye this time around, but there seems to be quite a few more typos in this chapter than previous ones. They weren't awful, but a quick browse could probably tidy things up a bit.
Edit: 7925139 Wait, really? I do have to say, the current 'end' is remarkably abrupt, considering just how much buildup there is to, well, more. The fact that I and several other commenters are wondering what's going to happen next is a pretty clear indication of this, I feel. As it is, the current ending is... underwhelming. It feels like you've only scratched the surface of the story and haven't achieved a satisfying climax yet (take that as you will). I do sincerely hope you continue this, at least insofar as Celestia, who is necessary for things to be properly concluded, I feel.
7925936 Did a once-over for grammar mistakes, so hopefully they're few and far between now.
As for the ending of this story, yeah, I understand where you're coming from completely. To be honest, I really do want to work on this story more and flesh out a world where Nightmare rules through diapers, but it's just like I said: I'm worried about it taking away time from other projects.
But, since you and others have been asking for more, and because I really want to, I will at least try to write out one more chapter for this story to show what would happen when Celestia finally shows up. Anything else beyond that would need to wait for the potential sequel, but hopefully one more chapter will make the ending more satisfying and less abrupt.
I'm rather partial to the idea myself that the only ponies she keeps padded are the Princesses. Sort of a living reminder of 'This is what I did to your rulers, now behave or you don't want to find out what I can do to you'.
Doing it to everypony, while amusing in concept, seems to weaken the humiliation factor somewhat, because Luna (And Celestia, if she shows up and loses) are no longer unique in that regard; whereas if they are made to be the only two (Or four, if one adds Twilight and Cadance. It's not like Flurry counts here since she's a literal baby), then the humiliation factor remains much more potent!
Love it. Best diaper related fic I've read in a while. Luna is a bit meek, but I guess it makes sense, she if anyone is intimately familiar with the power and malice of NMM. For a fic of this type, it's also unusually dark. Like Luna, I keep desperately hoping that there will be some light at the end of the tunnel, that Celestia will somehow manage to defeat NMM, or that Luna will wake up from a bad dream, or something.
7940134 though I think "Porn" is a little pushing it. There is no intercourse and never any sexual contact. It's purely fetish. I actually think you would like it as her writing style is quite similar to yours.
A long desperation and humiliation chapter with a full diaper at thr end. You never disappoint
Ooh, my!
7924949 I try not to Glad you liked it.
Over already? I was hoping for more.
7925100 I may continue this story later with some elements of an expanded alternate universe where Nightmare forces everypony to wear diapers, but that would take a lot of work and distract from the other projects I want to do, so I don't know when, or if, that would be made.
Though, if any writers out there want to use this AU that I've created, they're more than welcome to as well.
Loved it, I can't wait to see more of this story soon
Things are starting to pick up here. Personally, I'm looking forward to Celestia getting the same treatment (if that's what you have planned), although I'm also holding out hope for a Diaper Dictatorship of sorts (or at least the main six getting the treatment as well). That said, speaking on a personal preference level, I hope Nightmare mellows out a bit; I know domination and punishment are central themes here, but I've always enjoyed the idea of a character being forced into diapers and begrudgingly enjoying it. Nightmare's treatment, though, forms a barrier to a character (logically) forming that desire.
Anyways, I do have to comment on the grammar. Perhaps I have a more critical eye this time around, but there seems to be quite a few more typos in this chapter than previous ones. They weren't awful, but a quick browse could probably tidy things up a bit.
Edit:
7925139
Wait, really? I do have to say, the current 'end' is remarkably abrupt, considering just how much buildup there is to, well, more. The fact that I and several other commenters are wondering what's going to happen next is a pretty clear indication of this, I feel. As it is, the current ending is... underwhelming. It feels like you've only scratched the surface of the story and haven't achieved a satisfying climax yet (take that as you will). I do sincerely hope you continue this, at least insofar as Celestia, who is necessary for things to be properly concluded, I feel.
Also, that chapter title.
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7925936 Did a once-over for grammar mistakes, so hopefully they're few and far between now.
As for the ending of this story, yeah, I understand where you're coming from completely. To be honest, I really do want to work on this story more and flesh out a world where Nightmare rules through diapers, but it's just like I said: I'm worried about it taking away time from other projects.
But, since you and others have been asking for more, and because I really want to, I will at least try to write out one more chapter for this story to show what would happen when Celestia finally shows up. Anything else beyond that would need to wait for the potential sequel, but hopefully one more chapter will make the ending more satisfying and less abrupt.
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Most agreeable.
And I certainly look forward to things being given a little more page space to conclude.
What other projects might these be?
7927395 A couple of one-shots and another multi-chapter fic or two. I've got a lot of ideas, just gotta work on writing them down.
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I know the feeling :P
I'm rather partial to the idea myself that the only ponies she keeps padded are the Princesses. Sort of a living reminder of 'This is what I did to your rulers, now behave or you don't want to find out what I can do to you'.
Doing it to everypony, while amusing in concept, seems to weaken the humiliation factor somewhat, because Luna (And Celestia, if she shows up and loses) are no longer unique in that regard; whereas if they are made to be the only two (Or four, if one adds Twilight and Cadance. It's not like Flurry counts here since she's a literal baby), then the humiliation factor remains much more potent!
Love it. Best diaper related fic I've read in a while.
Luna is a bit meek, but I guess it makes sense, she if anyone is intimately familiar with the power and malice of NMM. For a fic of this type, it's also unusually dark. Like Luna, I keep desperately hoping that there will be some light at the end of the tunnel, that Celestia will somehow manage to defeat NMM, or that Luna will wake up from a bad dream, or something.
Is that a reference?
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Not to my knowledge
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Princess pottypants is the name of the largest writer of ABDL porn on the net right now.
7940098 Ah, I see.
I rarely look beyond Fimfic, so I had no idea about them. Guess it was just an accident.
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though I think "Porn" is a little pushing it. There is no intercourse and never any sexual contact. It's purely fetish. I actually think you would like it as her writing style is quite similar to yours.